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Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 5.1
Heyo, it's Prof. Jade here for a review. I thought I'd do this one and if you want me to review any others, let me know! First of all: The ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 1.1
Hello, Professor Jade here for a brief examination (professor talk!) I'm here to give a review. I'm afraid it won't be too long because I have to study two languages. ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: Hybrid Chapter 1( edited )
Hi, you may call me Professor Jade and I'm here to review this! I'm going to go through and just commentate my general thoughts and share tips. EnJoY! "Get out," ...
Mar 26, 2019 -
Re: Retaliating. Chapter Two
HI! You may call me Professor Jade and I will be giving you a complete and honest view of my thoughts on our work. I enjoy your writing and I ...
Mar 25, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 4.2
Hey. Professor Jade here with a (very detailed) review. Line by line. Letter by letter. I really love your writing style and I hope this helps improve it! Let's just ...
Mar 25, 2019 -
Re: Contract
Hello, Jade here. I saw you posted this on your page and the title caught my attention. So here I am. This is just a short view of my thoughts. ...
Mar 24, 2019 -
Re: The Rabbit and the Hen
Hello there! It's Jade here for a quick review!!! I think this was an awesome thought and pretty original. I mean, the moral is common but the idea was quite ...
Mar 23, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 4.1
My current thoughts are: Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Seriously, this is good! Why didn't you write just one more paragraph instead of leaving us here? I love this
Mar 23, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 3.3
Hello Random Stranger (lol). This is good :). I can see a huge improvement in your writing already and I really hope you keep posting! I think I saw a ...
Mar 21, 2019 -
Re: The demon maiden chapter one
OK, so I was snooping through your portfolio. Uhhhhh, I mean just looking at the fantasy genre,totally minding my own business...... and I decided to give this a try because ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 3.2
DISCLAIMER: I suck at explaining things so if anything I say sounds weird, like I've lost it, TELL ME! Hey hey hey! You are really good with your review so ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 3.1
I'm sorry I didn't review sooner! I read this but forgot. Please forgive me!! I loved the flow and the plot was mouth-watering (weird choice of words but it was ...
Mar 17, 2019 -
Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Ten
Yay! I really enjoyed this and the amount of description you put into this was brilliant. I really want to know what happens next and I kinda feel attached to ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: Reminiscing
This is awesome!!! You described everything perfectly. No I'm not crying, my cheeks are sweating. This was a one stanza and it gave it a childlike feel. The way you ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: Ghost
Hey! I'm going to review this poem. Let's just skip the introductions and get into it then. First stanza: It got my attention quite quickly, I liked it but it ...
Mar 14, 2019
