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Hello! this poem was really good. I don't have anything really to critique so i'm just going to say a few things I liked about your poem First what I ...

Hello! I say the title and it intrigued me and I say that it was you who wrote it and since you have reviewed my work many times I would ...

Hello! in this review i'm really just gonna state what I liked about each poem and maybe critique if I do have something to critique. First up is The Never-ending ...

Hello! This poem is very very good. It is also very relatable. In the begging of the poem you say "A unhealed child Who walks aimlessly through life No guide ...

Hello! I love this poem. I recently posted a poem about a boy i like but didn't know if he likes me. I love how in this poem you show ...

Yes! this poem is very relatable in a way. I can somewhat relate to this because I got my mothers looks and my fathers frustration. this goes through what its ...

I really like this poem. It captures the feeling of when you like someone really well. It also tells of how if they do know you like them but you ...

Hello! I clicked on this poem as soon as I read the title because I love the front bottoms. I also read the description and it intrigued me to also ...

this was a pretty good read. I like how you describe the place as somewhere you could find on earth but describe it in such a fantasy way. I also ...

Hello! I also really love butterflies and metaphors. while I was reading this poem I could that it was about butterflies but poetry is simply never that easy. my interpretation ...

in your description you wrote how it is about worshipping a god of which you can not see and I can see that through out some of the writing. at ...

this is very good and I feel like it captures losing either motivation, love, emotion for/in your writing. this reminds me of when you have writers block and cant think ...

Hello! I looked through the comments and saw that you said it was about child loss and I kept that in mind. as I was reading through it I could ...

This was really good I really enjoyed reading this. it had just the right amount of suspense not to much and not to little. your disrciption said you imagine it ...

I really like this poem. what I gather from this poem is that in the beginning everything is okay and is peaceful, then as the story progresses it starts getting ...