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Muted Confessions

by dm74

My heart races rapidly;

Thinking about everything I've yet to say

You know enough, or so you think,

But under the surface, these thoughts run deep.

I'm struggling to find the words to speak.

They dance and stray

Playing games like hide and seek.

Please understand, the truth you know is not complete;

but if I speak my heart, you might retreat. 

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Stickied -- Mon Mar 18, 2024 4:59 pm
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Okay, wow. first off, your poem captures the struggle of wanting to spill my heart out but feeling stuck in a word maze perfectly! It's like a peek into the chaotic mind battles we all go through. The way you described it made me feel the tension and uncertainty. And that ending? Left me hanging, wanting more! Overall, your poem is real and relatable, and I'd love to read more!! Keep writing, you have a knack for poetry and I want to know more! - Cupid 💘

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