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Re: the_highschoolparty
I posted this is the wrong place I'm so sorry
Sep 28, 2023 -
Re: Depressed to kill
AHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay I need to start of by saying that. I love to review horror and I am obsesseddddd with this. "The suspense decreases with each passing moment. It becomes ...
Sep 28, 2023 -
Re: red lipstick
Howdy! This is very very beautiful!
Sep 28, 2023 -
Re: Dance With the Devil
Hello ariah347! It has been a long time since I've reviewed any of your work! :D Right off the bat, this is gorgeous writing. I love how you make the ...
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: i exist but im considered useless
Hey, Hey! Kz in for a (short) review! My favorite line: "the lonely iceberg that feels the cold loud crickets make my ears bleed deep middle child I am, nothing ...
Sep 29, 2022 -
Re: Worth
Hi! Kz here for a long-ish, (Positive) impression/initial thoughts. Wow! This was incredible! Very beautifully written. So here's how I go. I'm going to quote two lines from your poem, ...
Sep 29, 2022 -
Re: Choices
Hi, my name is Kz, I also write poetry. So, to dive in. Author's questions: 1. How do you think the title relates to the poem? So, the title of ...
Sep 28, 2022 -
Re: Searched at School
Wow, just wow. I don't exactly have words for how i feel right now. they handed out a survey asking if we felt safe here and I said no, because ...
Sep 28, 2022 -
Re: Only U
Hey! Kz back wit a review!!! I love your song, and the story behind it! this song is really emotional! (quick qu... did she realize? if so... how did it ...
Oct 20, 2021 -
Re: Heart ache
Hey! its Kz! I am super into songs, I just joined YWS and so far, I reviewed mostly songs. Lolz. I am a singer/ songwriter so this is huge for ...
Oct 20, 2021 -
Re: the scream.
Hey! Kz, here! I just wanted to say... OMFG!!! I absolutely love this. Some quick things... "I DECIDED TO LET IT OUT. IT LEFT EASIER THAN IT CAME, GUSHING FORTH ...
Oct 20, 2021 -
Re: Destiny: Chapter One
Hey! it's Kz! Loved your work!!! It is detailed and I can really imagine myself there, so that is amazing! I am completely UNABLE to do that for my readers. ...
Oct 19, 2021
