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Re: Summer Closure
Hey hun, Kyla here. I enjoyed this piece, and I'm sure you enjoyed writing it. I just want to break the first part down, just to give you a small ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Regreting Meeting Me
Hello, Kyla here. I think this is amazing! It is very good. I want to ask though - and as I just said to someone else- I will be asking ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: The Beauty Underneath
Hello there, my name is Kyla Thompson. You probably haven't seen me around, I was gone for quite some time. I have a question for you. First off, do you ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: That Night
Hello there, my name is Kyla. I'm sure you haven't seen me around, I haven't been on in quite some time. This is just my P.O.V and if I am ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: Those who cannot speak revised
I wanted to give another review on this to tell you why I did this, and help you understand what I meant when I rephrased this. I quoted it the ...
Mar 29, 2013 -
Re: Those who cannot speak revised
Hello, here to review you as you asked. I think that it is good and strong, I really like it dear. I tend to rhyme in my poems, so I ...
Mar 29, 2013 -
Re: Peace
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I think this poem holds truth, I like it!I am big on punctuation, you can ask someone whom I've reviewed before, I love punctuation ...
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: When Sleep is Trickling
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I really like this poem! It's really strong, a subtle topic, and it flows nicely. I would like to break it down into pieces ...
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Engraved
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I really like this poem, it's very nice. I think that it has a good flowing movement to it. As I do to everyone ...
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Moonrise
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I like this poem, it's very lovely! I want to break it down and tell you how I see it. I do this to ...
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Peace and Resolution
Hello, Kyla here to review you! I really like this, you can feel the emotion and how you express yourself. I would like to break it down and tell you ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: The Moon As It Is
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I really enjoyed reading this poem! I think it is subtle, and neat. I would like to break it down though, as I do ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: What's Unseen By Many
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I really like this poem, I think it is good. I would like to take this time to write it the way I see ...
Mar 7, 2013 -
Re: The Painter
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I like this poem, I think it is very nice. I would like to break the poem apart and tell you what I think. ...
Mar 7, 2013 -
Re: Desires
Hello, Kyla here to review you. I really like this piece, it's very nice. I would like to go through every paragraph and tell you what I think. If I ...
Mar 7, 2013