Kwantack

I love these...what are they called...vertical poems? Yeah. This is really cool! I liked the emotion you put into it. Just a couple of things... Running away to find a ...

I agree with write4life--I think you need to separate your paragraphs a little more. This will make it easier to read. But other then that, I think this was really ...

I liked this. Some things that I would change, though, would be: First line, get rid of first comma. Same goes for second to last line--the comma at the end ...

Hey, I really liked this. A few things, Magnet supposed to be capatalized? And I think you could use some more punctuation (except in the first line, I'd suggest taking ...

Wow. Falling into procrastination is something I can relate to. This was very enjoyable to read and it wasn't confusing or anything. My favorite part is "There is no escape." ...

I know how you feel with this. Pencils get lost so frequently...anyway, I enjoyed reading this. The only thing would be that the second stanza has sort of a different ...

Excellent. Truly excellent. You have a wonderful style of writing poetry and this flows fantastically!! I loved this so much! I really enjoyed it. I don't have any suggestions (sorry) ...

I think this is pretty! This is well done and pretty good. Try capatalizing the first letter of each line. I'm also wondering if at the very end you should ...

Um, yeah, basically I agree with everyone else. Structure and format. It needs to look like a poem as well as sound like a poem. I think that's really the ...

This is very good!! It's cool how the words sort of make a wall...whether you did that on purpose or not I know not. I think you should add some ...

This is good. But I believe tomorrow is spelled incorrectly in the first stanza, second line. This has a very interesing feeling to it. Your vocabulary is good. The flow ...

Stuff is one of my favorite words!!! This was wonderfully done, I think. It reminds me of when I wrote a poem using the word 'doth' in every line--just because ...

This is fantastic! I agree that the last line should be changed to "Is me" to be grammatically correct, but I think that both endings have a strong emotion held ...

Wow! I really liked the last two stanzas the best. This has a good message to it, I think, and you did a nice job with making it clear. The ...

I loved this to such an extent I read it like five times. Poems about animals are so cool! You did a really good job with this and I enjoyed ...