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Re: Of Laughter and Men
Hello! Ktg here to review, for you! :D Personally, when I look to review something, the number one thing I look for is the category (Romance) and the second is ...
Jun 16, 2012 -
Re: Mission: What a pain
Hello there! This is a nice piece. It was intriguing and exciting, and I'm sure if you expand this into more it will be wonderful. I really like the tone ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: The Movie Theater Rooftop
Hello there! I really liked this piece. It was thoughtful and short and sweet. :) I think if you wanted to expand this a little more, you could add to ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Collecting Hearts
Great Job! This was really good! I love this song, so when I read your title I was hooked. This piece is interesting, clever, well thought out, and just overall ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Debated Importance of Cookies Versus Essays
Welcome to YWS! I really really liked this story. You had a few grammar errors but it is really late here so I will be back ASAP tomorrow to give ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Love shouldn't hurt
Haha I love this. It's short, sweet, and fantastic. :) Soooooo many people can relate to this, so a broad audience will love it! I love your last line! It ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Lone Lily
Well of course there are good things about it! :) I liked it. It is similiar to other stories, but who ever said that was always a bad thing? Sometimes ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: We are the same/ something changed
Hello there! I'm Ktg and I'll be reviewing your piece today. Wow. This was really really good. It flowed really good and it was just all around lovely. I especially ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: May
Ok, this is like, breathtaking. Wow. I'm in awe ofk your work. Normally with poems like these, I get bored about half way through and end up just clicking the ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Random
Haha ok I like it. At first I though you were talking about having wrter's block, but now that I'm done with it I'm not sure.... Are you asking for ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Myriad maze
Haha I love this! It's so simple, yet so amazing. The flow is great. I am so jealous- you can write something so awesome without even meaning to! The thought ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: If I Were
Awwwwwwww cute poem! Its so sweet :) First off, I really liked this, but I think you could fix up some of the grammar. Also, maybe put these in stanzas. ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Dream
I am so sorry, but I have to say that this was.......Amazing :) I can see where they are coming from, saying it's to short, but I disagree. I like ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: A true writer
I love it! It's so simple, yet so descriptive and perfect. Plus, being a writer and all, this makes me feel awesome XD The ending is my favorite. It wraps ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: (insert interesting title here)
Haha how creative!!! I like this. The last line is amazingy funny. The poem seemed really serious, and then you read the last line and it just makes you smile. ...
May 30, 2011
