Hi mustang!
Okay, so this is going to be a horrible nit-picky thing that I noticed, but you keep on saying stuff like, "If I were the car / I would be the fuel..." Anyway, my response to that is, "No! You already said that you were the car... how can you be the fuel too?!" So yeah... a very nit-picky thing, but it made this poem a little bit more of a struggle for me to read... and yes, I am crazy, lol.
Also, another thing... you have two forms of "gentle" in the last line. It seems weird, first of all, because it's really the only time that an adjective and adverb are used in this entire piece, so it's a bit awkward. Next of all, it's kind of repetitious. Anyway, this line seems to predominate the entire poem, and I have to wonder, "Is there any reason for this?" So, basically, is being a boat something better than being something else? It's a bit weird!
Oh, and there were typos... listen to the other guys for that!
Anyway, those were the two things I noticed. Cute piece you have here!
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