Krystalstars

I like it alot but this... "Convince myself, don’t believe her And put it behind you" Confused me. I thought we were talking about a guy.... Overall it was good ...

Chapter 3 Misty stirred in her sleep, it was dark outside and rain was pounding at the windows. Jordan was writing in her journal about her day at school. Dear ...

Chapter 2 Misty crept through the door, she had returned home to grab her bags. She tip toed across her dark, dingy trailer’s living room to her room. She closed ...

You can be assured that I will be goin on with this! Thank you for the critic.....I didn't see the spell check button but I will use that now that ...

Very good, although I'd expand it a bit. Make it more discriptive!

CHAPTER 1 _____________________________________________________________ Colton Ryd shivered, he was standing at the rail of his ship The Pillager Waiting for the captain, the crew was just far enough

Well....there's kinda a message. I wrote this after my father passed away so I think it's kinda about getting tired of feeling like Crap and standing tall...

Thank you for the positive comments! Although I don't see what rule I broke.

I love this poem! I'd clear up what "Charocal spheres" is though! I'm postig it on my website!

Thank you for the tips! It was going to be a song and I had a tune but I have forgotton it.......... :( But thank you!

I like it alot! The end part is my favorite.... Good job!

The last part is confusing but other than that it rocks!

That was very good, although a little bland and chopey.... Otherwise very good!

Awesome! I love that movie...

Well...I porbably (spelling?) should have put it in lyrics but I like it as a poem better. But thank you for the positive review!