KrystaG

Hey there KrystaG here, I am going to review your piece!(: First off, I would cut my wrist until I was dead. This is only because I have gone through ...

Hey there, KrystaG here. I am going to review your poem.(: First off, this is very rateable and I find that being able to have your readers relate to your ...

I absolutely loved it. I like how you made it rhyme and I like how its not to long. It pretty much cuts to the chase. So far I have ...

I'm not the best at reviewing but I will try. I did not expect to be so pleased with your piece but I was. I can related to a lot ...

I liked how you talked about how the porch swing always creaks and how you talked about the splinters. Growing up with one on my front porch, I have had ...

This was a sweet story, I love reading about couples. A couple who investigates paranormal activity is a great idea. This needs a couple of grammar fixes for sure, but ...

I found this poem very easy to relate too. I like how you used the word "vacant". It was a really good way to explain the sentence. I am not ...

I like how the stanzas all start with "its so strange" until the last one. I like it because you sound like you are changing he topic, you could have ...

This was an amazing story. Only a few questions though . One is he like the devil or is he some kind of boogie man ? Another one is how ...

This was such an amazing story. The ending really shocked me. It also left me hanging. Do you make it until.morning to see the sun? And why did you all ...

I love that you used two completely opposite things and compared them. I would have never thought of the idea to use math and love as an equal. That's very ...

You could have used much more detail. Given some more information as well. I think that the last thing in mind I would be thinking about is my pet hampser ...