KnightlyAngel09

This is brilliant.:D I find that the rhythm falters in the 3rd and 4th stanzas though. Anyway, aside from that I find nothing else wrong with this poem. This poem ...

Hmm... all I have to say is that this was too short. This was really beautiful and emotional but I beleive it would have been better if it was longer. ...

Hey.XD Welcome here.:) oh, thanks for the review you gave my poem, I am here to return the favor. My first thought on this poem was that it was the ...

I really liked this. To me, it seems as if the speaker in the poem knows he'll be better but at the same time can't fully accept it. Certainly a ...

Quite a powerful poem. This was really hopeful and for that, I absolutely loved this. I must agree though with the other reviewers, minor errors on rhythm but that's alright ...

I really liked this poem. Except for the second stanza. I think the second stanza destroys the feel of this poem. Also, the very last line destroys the rhythm of ...

Her eyes opened wide as she stared in awe. The bleak, gray universe differed from what she saw. (last line is too long. I think it destroys the rhythm...) The ...

hello and welcome here.:) this is quite good. It's very honest. However, I feel that the emotions here are very abstract. I think the emotions just have to be concretized ...

I felt rather guilty that whenever I review your poems I'm not too helpful so here. I'm not sure though but I shall try. From the very moment my eyes ...

This was really sad. I think the simplicity of the language and the metaphors used added to the impact of this poem. It sounded more sincere and more painful. There ...

I don't think it sounded sexual. The tone sounded rather dark to me honestly. Which made the first part sound suicidal. The first part sounded like the voice of temptation ...

Lovely. Love poetry plus celestial bodies equals brilliance to me. Biased maybe since I love astronomy too much but not really because this poem was effing good. Although I must ...

This is really good. I think the fact that it truly came from the heart gave it so much emotion and made it really beautiful. Prejudice is indeed a sad ...

Behold! Behold the beast for It is the nature's prince. Behold! Behold the creature that makes the unique wince: (Unique? I'm sure you can find a better word for this. ...

Hello.:) And welcome heeere. Pretty intense poetry here. I commend you for making it so vivid. You also expressed well in this poem, expressed identity, I mean. 'Tis one of ...