KnightlyAngel09

Hello.:) I liked the intensity of this poem. I think it's really difficult to write about really strong emotions so kudos to you for that. Now, I think precisely because ...

Hello.:) First of all, who is your avatar? Must. Stalk. Haha. I love your use of rhythm. It's not often I come across a poem on here with such a ...

Hi.:) You commented on a poem of mine so I thought I'd return the favor. But first of all, welcome to YWS.:) I hope you shall enjoy your stay. This ...

Hello.:) Here I am to review. I like your concept and I think the title adds to the substance of this poem. It makes you see it in the context ...

Hello.:) First of all *follows*. This was an amazing story. Your wording was great. You described emotions so colorfully that this wasn't your cliche romance at all. There's a certain ...

Hello.:) I really liked this poem. It was as if you were painting the world before my eyes as I read it. That's a testament to how vivid your imagery ...

Hi! Sorry if this is a short review as I'm reviewing from my phone. Anyway, I often write in rhyme myself and am really partial to it. As Lily said ...

Hey niteowl.:) I really liked this. I think you captured the fear of many teenagers of not belonging and feeling alone while at the same time packaging it differently so ...

Hello.:) Like the reviewer said above, it did feel as if you were talking to me. So I guess what this poem achieves is a strong persona. Although quite honestly, ...

Hello.:) Alright, I really think this needs a lot of work. I find it lacking in a lot of aspects and I'm really sure you can turn this into something ...

Hello.:) First of all, I really liked this. You said you didn't do poetry that often, well, now that I've read this, I'm hoping you make more. I think you ...

Hello.:) I think you're dealing with a heavy topic here and if you simply wanted to convey a message then you did just that. You told a story, and if ...

Hello.:) I agree with the reviewers above me, the rhyme scheme was sloppy. I think though that you tried to use a lot of metaphors in this poem which is ...

Hello.:) I really liked this. The language and metaphors you used were consistent throughout which really made the poem solid. I do think that the rhythm needs work though. However, ...

Hello. You're new here, aren't you?:) Well, first of all, welcome.:D I'm sure one of the mods will acquaint you with the house rules soon anyway so I won't waste ...