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Re: Teardrops Mixing With The Rain
Emo101cats, there should be an edit option, click on that, then click save/publish (I don't remember which one it is) but then you should come to a page where there ...
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Re: for her
Hello My Iggy! I'm not going to bother with grammar because this is poetry. The beginning was beautiful. Your words paint a picture that my mind doth see. i bought ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Mitchell's Help Guide - Chapter 1
So welcome back retards. It's good to be back. You ready for this? I am going to blow your mind. I love mind-blowing experiences. I apologise in advance if you ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Sunsets
We had a deal, my sweet sorcerer, did we not? :) I have to say, I am not going to nitpick this. Why? you may ask. The answer is simple. ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Stronger: Prologue
Hey! KnightTeen (You can call me Teen, everyone does) is here on this lovely review day to give you a (hopefully) lovely review! All her life, she always had been ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Mitchell: Everyone Must Read
Hello fuckfaced readers. Well hello to you to. I have called it my autobiography, but in actuality it isn't. I have called it my autobiography, but in actuality , it ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Angels
Hey, Knight Teen here to review. This is really good. I love the rhyme, how the stanzas are pretty even, and your narrative is really good. Don't worry about posting ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: In Fifty Years, North America Will Be...
This is absolutely hilarious. I love how you basically just pulled all of this out of the air and wrote it for your character to write. I'm dying of laughter ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: Two : Twenty-two
I really like how you based this on a bible verse. (Christian here, very weird christian, but christian nonetheless) And I like how the work kind of stays away from ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: A Matter of Some Gravity
This was really funny. And since it's located in humor (one of my favorite genres) it's supposed to be. I loved the ending. If you were writing for any other ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: Welcome to deh Family.
Hey! KnightTeen, here to review! This is pretty darn awesome, and one of the truest things that I have ever read. While the rhythm is a bit off, I like ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: After a Poetry Slam
Meg, my dear, I have to be honest. I don't really know what to make of this. At first I thought it might be humor or drama, but it's not ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: ...
You make some really good points, and you present your argument clearly and back it up. That's really good. Short, but sweet and to the point. I did notice a ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: If I Had Wings
I'm glad you explained the thing about the last rhyme. Being a rhyme Nazi, I would have critiqued it. And me they would see. I'm guessing that you probably did ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Nothing
A poem about how I annoyed with emo accounts of Instagram . . . :) I don't even have an Instagram and I get annoyed when I hack my friends ...
Apr 6, 2014
