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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dragged Down by the Stone - Part Three: Baptism of Fire

    Tee hee, fresh meat. *licks lips* Let's get down to it, shall we? I am looking for an opportunity to work at a place like that quite a while because ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Swimming to my Own Beat

    Hey Estel, HT here to review. First off, Here we go. Swimming to my Beat, chapter 1. I don’t own anything. This fic involves competitive swimming, so I’ll explain the ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Humanity

    Sad, but so heartbreakingly true. This was very well written, but there are two things that I would like to point out to you. First: more of this tune we ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Starlight

    Hey, here for yet another review. I thought that this was very good. Your flow was smooth, in my opinion, and you topic was covered and not to overly covered, ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Something I Would Bestow Upon No One

    This is so true that it hurts. I've never had a seizure, and no one that I'm related to has ever had epilepsy, but I have a friend who is ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Review, Fantasy Re: Author Snapshot - Maria V. Snyder

    This article is very good. I've never read Snyder's books, and this definitely got me interested. I like how you bolded out the titles of the books to make them ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Silentville:- Chapter One

    Hey, HT here to review. Your grammar could use a little work, but overall I think that this was very good and it definitely was a good read. I'm not ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Another Knight's Tale Chapter 1

    You made your style very clear here, and you didn't compromise it (not that I'm saying you would, I'm just pointing that out.) Although, I couldn't really understand why you ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Girl Who Never Smiled

    I thought that this was very good. Somewhat depressing, but very good. I can see hardly grammar errors except for a few typos, and I won't point those out, just ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Winter

    Hey, HT here to review. I thought that this as very well written. You flow was pretty consistent, and your rhyme scheme was very good. But I do have some ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 5

    YAY! More Amethyst! Now that the initial fun is over, let's get down to business. I quoted the whole piece, then cut out what I didn't need to mention. I ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: This is How the Note Read

    I'm guessing (and I have been wrong before) that a guy committed suicide over a girl. Once upon a time I would've said "God, why do people have to be ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Daddy

    Hey, HT (or HST if you prefer) here for a review. This was really good. It reminded me of both of my fathers, the one who raised and loved me, ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: My Dagger Bleeds Love bcuz My Heart is under-Siege

    I'm with Lioness, and I am currently trying not to shudder at the chatspeak that you used. In addition, I didn't really think that the title fit exactly, considering they ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Satire Re: The black rose

    Hey, HT here to review. Now, I'm afraid that I don't quite understand the meaning of your second line. The cheerful nature and all that might, Well, the second part ...

    Aug 13, 2013


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