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KnightTeen

The Knight of Teens

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dragged Down by the Stone - Part Three: Baptism of Fire

    Tee hee, fresh meat. *licks lips* Let's get down to it, shall we? I am looking for an opportunity to work at a place like that quite a while because ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Swimming to my Own Beat

    Hey Estel, HT here to review. First off, Here we go. Swimming to my Beat, chapter 1. I don’t own anything. This fic involves competitive swimming, so I’ll explain the ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Humanity

    Sad, but so heartbreakingly true. This was very well written, but there are two things that I would like to point out to you. First: more of this tune we ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Starlight

    Hey, here for yet another review. I thought that this was very good. Your flow was smooth, in my opinion, and you topic was covered and not to overly covered, ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Something I Would Bestow Upon No One

    This is so true that it hurts. I've never had a seizure, and no one that I'm related to has ever had epilepsy, but I have a friend who is ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Review, Fantasy Re: Author Snapshot - Maria V. Snyder

    This article is very good. I've never read Snyder's books, and this definitely got me interested. I like how you bolded out the titles of the books to make them ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Silentville:- Chapter One

    Hey, HT here to review. Your grammar could use a little work, but overall I think that this was very good and it definitely was a good read. I'm not ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Another Knight's Tale Chapter 1

    You made your style very clear here, and you didn't compromise it (not that I'm saying you would, I'm just pointing that out.) Although, I couldn't really understand why you ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Girl Who Never Smiled

    I thought that this was very good. Somewhat depressing, but very good. I can see hardly grammar errors except for a few typos, and I won't point those out, just ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Winter

    Hey, HT here to review. I thought that this as very well written. You flow was pretty consistent, and your rhyme scheme was very good. But I do have some ...

    Aug 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 5

    YAY! More Amethyst! Now that the initial fun is over, let's get down to business. I quoted the whole piece, then cut out what I didn't need to mention. I ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: This is How the Note Read

    I'm guessing (and I have been wrong before) that a guy committed suicide over a girl. Once upon a time I would've said "God, why do people have to be ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Daddy

    Hey, HT (or HST if you prefer) here for a review. This was really good. It reminded me of both of my fathers, the one who raised and loved me, ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: My Dagger Bleeds Love bcuz My Heart is under-Siege

    I'm with Lioness, and I am currently trying not to shudder at the chatspeak that you used. In addition, I didn't really think that the title fit exactly, considering they ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Satire Re: The black rose

    Hey, HT here to review. Now, I'm afraid that I don't quite understand the meaning of your second line. The cheerful nature and all that might, Well, the second part ...

    Aug 13, 2013


Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.
— George Orwell, 1984