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Re: Rumored Friends
Hey, HT here to review. You are one of the thirteen that I hopefully will finish before the clock strikes twelve. Literally wrote this five min ago, so the title ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 1
Hey DOP. Or Dragon. Or Phoenix. Whatever you prefer. I saw you dominating the Green Room, and it led me to this. I figured I should read the first two ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 2
Okay, seriously, I am hooked. You aren't going to be able to get rid of me now. Kob puffed up his cheeks and held his rotund stomach. Looking miffed, he ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Last Late Night
I almost don't want to review this, since it is seems so, I don't know, personal. But here goes nothing. I'm going to make some slight corrections where I think ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Benjamin Bumblebee
This is one of three (or more) reviews that you will receive by a member of the Knights. Truly there is nothing to criticize here. Your rhythm is one of ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)
Hey Blackwood. Your avatar freaks me out. Also sorry for formatting. Publishing Centre sucks. Amen, but you are preaching to the choir. If I had a dime for every time ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: September 11, 12 years ago
Let me just say that I don't think you offended anybody, and that you did something that I think was very brave. This is something that is a very hard ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 6
'Don’t be an ass Emma' Eliza said. I've been having a glitch that doesn't let me see the ratings, so if you have one already, my bad. You need to ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 5
Dinner time the speakers let out a voice. Everyone started moving out for dinner. I think that you should give more indication that "Dinner time!" is being said. And I ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: The Story Of An England Pencil
I don't know if I was supposed to find this funny or not, but I did, so........yeah. I just was tickled at the personification of a pencil. It's not something ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: They Called Me A Liar
This was very good, one of your best, I believe. I could almost see the emotion in the words, and I mean that literally, not figuratively. The way you wrote ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Loneliness
This was very emotional and heart felt. I feel like this a lot (even when I'm on here sometimes). But enough about my depressed ass, let's get on to the ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Hope.
*Knight Teen enters the cave cautiously with her sword drawn and at the ready. Jonathan has requested that the KOTGR take care of a little beast problem he has been ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: A Cowardly Pandora
Knight Teen here to give you one of your requested KOTGR reviews. And, not only do you get to receive your second Knight review with this review, but you are ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Minds That Aspire
I thought that this one was (or should I say is?) one of your best that I have read and reviewed so far. The content was simply amazing, the appearance ...
Sep 8, 2013
