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Re: Tornado Goes Round
Another review by, I, Kitty! Again, set out your shields! Before I begin, I like how this is only 2 stanzas short, so it's simple to read, and fitting as ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Beast
Hi, SecreteJournalist! I have arrived at your doorstep to review "Beast". Prepare your shields of such ordinary paper. It started out strange, freight trains are heard. I feel the breeze, ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Unity
Hello, my fellow friend! Why am I here? Oh, the answer is simple, and you already know - to review! Let's start by talking about what needs improvement: 1. Unnecessary ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Just Smile
Hi, Hsarver! I exist to review your poem here, so now, I will! The long awaited review has arrived! A grin, a simple smile of joy, Has the power to ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Still Here
Hi, MysteryMe! It's me, Kitty, for a super quick review for a quick poem! You tear me to pieces. How? I know this is supposed to be short, but four ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Indecisive Fate Ch.1
Ch. 2 will be reviewed by, yes, me! :3 To start off, let's check this out: My name is Ivan. Starting with that is not very mature. Perhaps starting it ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Indecisive Fate Prologue
Hello, MadWriter! XD I'm here to review your prologue! I'm not very good at novels, although I can have a shot at it! Give me the best of luck! June ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Silly Bee
Hi! I exist to review this poem. Ready? I will begin! :3 Stanza to stanza! HERE I GO! I’m sick of falling for every flower, wish I could be a ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: What Penguins Really Think
Hello, Strange. XD You aren't really strange though. I'm here today to review your work, so hey, do you feel special? Well, to begin, I love how this is short, ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Hi, paula. I'm here to review for you! ;) Now, now, don't back down in humiliation from all those *glances at commenters* over there. A sestina isn't really three sentences ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Princess's Feet
Hi fortis! Just going to review this haiku of yours! It'll be quick XD. Of course it will! Nitpicks: First line. No s at the end of princess'. are scarred ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Fire
Hello, Sapi! I have arrived to write a fellow review for you! While reading, I noticed you only mentioned something about fire once. That really confuses me thanks to the ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Hidden Men
Hello Niraco! :3 Do you have any idea why I am here? Of course you do! (Unless you don't...) TO REVIEW! Before I begin, I love how you used the ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Beast
Hi! I'm here to review your poem here! While I was reading this poem out loud, I enjoyed it quite a lot as it had a lot of rhythm and ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Eternal Nothing
Hi emmylou! Why am I here you ask? To review of course! Speaking for all of these stanzas, I think that they shouldn't really be a different number of lines ...
Oct 27, 2013
