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Re: Cinquain Poem; Death
Hi again! Reviewing for review day once more! Go Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto! When reading this, I noticed that although this was very short, it still held a ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: I defy you, stars.
Once again! Another review! Do you hate me now? >.< Beginning on format, since you made the first stanza only four lines, it immediately broke the simple flow and rhythm ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: REALLY Short Story- Soldier
Hi, Final! Time for a review! To start off, I don't really understand what was the point of this. Even though it was well-written and very descriptive, the essentials just ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 7: Cynthia, More of the First Floor
Hello, rainbowcabbit! Reviewing your chapter here! Funny how humans name such tasty food after animals. I don't see where this was based off of. There was a place where it ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: My Light Death
'ello, Lotus! Today, I am here to review for Review Day! There's something incredibly big that I noticed that was a huge problem. GRAMMAR. GRAMMAR IS A HUUUUUGE PROBLEM o.o; ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter One: Cynthia, Volunteers
Hey, rainbowcabbit! I'm going to have to keep this short, since it's good enough as a revised version! "I have bad news," the man states, "It appears our world is ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: London Bridge
Hey, ancient! You're not that ancient, so we can keep you young and healthy! First of all, you requested not to talk about the capitals. *Puts paws behind head while ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Gray Lace ~ Prologue
Hey, Marysue! The cat is here to review your prologue here! I don't normally review novel chapters/prologues etc., although I'll give this a shot. There are already many others who ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Ignorant Haiku
Hi, Sumi! I have arrived to review "Ignorant Haiku". Hmm, sounds pretty interesting! Starting from looking at the title, it already hooks the reader in. Great work on that part! ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Hungry Cat
Hey, Shalie! My humble servant? No, my humble... hmm... just kneel before me! I, the cat, will review this poem. Therefore you must take careful heed of my commands. Let ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Robot Girl
Hey, retro! Kitty here for once again, once more, another review! To start, I want to tell you that this is a very unique subject that you focused on, so ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Moon Beams (a haiku)
Hi vampire! How are you? :3 I'm here to review your haiku here! Before I begin, I would like to say that lines formatting looked forced. It was as if ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Haiku of Despair
Hi, poketheprincess! Today is the day you receive a wonderful review by yours truly. I'm going line to line. Prepare for my greatness! my heart only breaks This is a ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Autum (Haiku)
Hi, Jolene! I'm here to review your haiku! Firstly, a nitpick in the title. It should be "Autumn" not "Autum". Let's go line by line because hey, a haiku is ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Track marks
Hi, retro! Remember me? Yeah, I'm the reviewer that reviews a ton of your works because you are my victim that I love to use XD So prepare of a ...
Nov 24, 2013
