KittyBee

The subject of the poem is terrific. It's a bold, honest and rather profound concept about the ideas of "ugly" versus those of "beautiful"-- and I really like it. The ...

I adore this. It's so strange for me, because usually I would rip such an abstract work in half, but it was done correctly. I love the presentation of tarot ...

The pattern of the rhyming of this piece is a bit awkward. In the first stanza, which is my favorite of the three, rhymes greatly until the last sentence. 7 ...

I enjoy the lightness of the work. There are a few grammatical errors, but I'm not sure if they're in place for emphasis or if they are actually errors. The ...

The lack of structure does further emphasize the lucidity of the work, which does a fine job of sculpting out a mood and tone. I like the way you incorporated ...

I really like the lucid, light-headed feeling of the poem. The emphasis added by the italics is especially fitting. Though I can't exactly make sense of what is going on ...

The poem has very nice wording. I like the effect of the syllables and the rhythm you created with them. Reading it flows smoothly, and it's very clean and easy ...

The word-choice of the poem is nice, and the first stanza is my favorite of the two. The rhyming in the second stanza, as I see people have said, is ...

Upon first reading this, I felt as though it was going to be a bit babyish. The second stanza uses passive voice, which is usually a total turn of for ...

Hello! Alright, here we go. The message in the poem is very clear, which is good, yet I feel like the emotion just doesn't quite get to me. It's sort ...