KingLucifer

Listen Sweetheart, I don't mean to offend but I'm not going to butter anything up. If you're going to write her then make her feel more real cause no one ...

Looking though this I believe you may have skipped some part or another cause Senka never fights in this one. I honestly don't believe I'm rushing anything and I think ...

*Claps.* As a fellow gamer I agree the gaming community has a lot of potential good it could do.

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I would like to point out this being the fault of the publishing system. I tried to put it into proper but this was how it came out.

The detail to this is extensive and I do like that in the stories I read, a lot of mystery is surrounding the story for we don't even know the ...

This is very, how to say? Dead on, I really like it. The rhyme scheme here is very good, definitly makes the poem more interesting. All tho I do often ...

How about you guys take this else where, I've had enough shit for one work and don't need anymore, this is end of the discussion.

WordPerfect is not with Micro Soft word matter of fact I find Microsoft word totally crap in comparason to the one I use and there is a secret to these ...

Bah some review I'm openly trashing this, I do not consider this a review, matter of fact I consider it trash since all you did was trash my work, you ...

I had to admit this is pretty good, but as barefootrunner said there was a lot of information dumping during the opening to this chapter. I highly suggest working on ...

I like this, definitly deserves to be turned into a novel. The main key elements being the blood on my part. but vengence has a taste in it's own, I ...

This has me wondering to what exactly is going on here? Far as my knowledge goes there is a bad mother****** in a cage. That Zeus doesn't kill himself.

*stands up and applauds* We are truely the next generation and even now your words are inspiring to us just as much as we are to you. I applaud you ...

I read though this and now I have a headache, I honestly can't believe how sexist this is. You rant on how all men act egotistical, how "bossy" and "untidy" ...