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Re: The kiss of death (will probably change this title though)
I'm Avalon and I'll be your reviewer. Praise: This was interesting, it could be easily made into a novel with this as a Prologue and follow Alexandra as the new ...
Aug 29, 2014 - Re: Andrew - An Introduction Aug 28, 2014
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Re: Looks
Top of the morning to you Unconsoled, I'm Avalon and I'll be your reviewer today! Praise: Now given this is such a short piece I don't got a whole lot ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: A Certain Set Of Skills (Title Pending), Part Two
Vyper buddy! I'm here for a review like I promised. Praise: This does well for the plot as we can see just what kind of man Rufe is and what ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: A Certain Set Of Skills (Title Pending)
Vyper man it's Avalon and I'm here for a review. One of the things you should be careful with is opening with action as you did. I say you should ...
Aug 27, 2014 -
Re: The Bully. Chapter 3.
Hey Dragongirl, I'm Avalon and I'll be reviewing this work. Now I've been reading this novel right along and I will say I do like what I've read. Felix having ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: The loss of a Mother.
I'm Avalon and I'll be your reviewer for this work. First off I want to say is this is roughly two or three paragraphs merged together in one big block ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: One Last Leap of Faith
I'm Avalon and I'll be your reviewer for this piece. Now I can't really say as to what inspired this piece it's very sad and heartbreaking. Now I don't know ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Heaven and Hell chapter one
I'm Avalon and I will be your reviewer for this work. I will be honest here and sum this work up into two words, boring and generic. This does has ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Persona Non Grata
This Avalon and this is going to be a quick review. This is really simple and really to the point, it ultimately describes you, which I feel could be longer ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: The Stories~Random Genres and Stories
I am Avalon, and I'll be your reviewer for this work. My first problem with this work: Focus. When I say "Focus" I mean focus on one story, "The Girl ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Emergence: Chapter 1
Hello, I'm Avalon and this'll be your review. First things first, I'm completely forgoing anything on grammar since someone who's a lot better at it than me will do it. ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Handwoven
This is Avalon and I'll be your reviewer for this piece. Now I do greatly like this it tells a lot in a short time this mainly being romantic so ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Introduce to Stephanie
This is Avalon here with a possibly unofficial review due to the rather shortness of this. First off this character doesn't feel very real to me reason being you just ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: The Other Side Chapter 1
This is Avalon and I will be acting as your reviewer today. First off this is short enough that it can probably be considered a prologue. Problem is you give ...
May 19, 2014