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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: December

    Ok, this is my opinion. the poem is ok. it didn't really sound like a poem to me. some of the ways you order words sound very odd. I think ...

    Dec 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love

    I like this poem. it has a good flow to it. the message for this poem is a message to share with other people. there isn't much or anything to ...

    Nov 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)

    I love this poem. it is an awesome poem. the message of the poem is a message to spread to the whole world. the flow of the poem is perfect. ...

    Nov 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One Final Time

    I like this poem. it is very interesting and I think other people will like this poem too. It's sad and depressing but I like those types of poems. The ...

    Nov 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: We All Go Marching One by One

    I like that poem it's cool because of what it is talking about. This was a great poem for me to read because in English we are talking about poems ...

    Nov 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Girl Called Beast

    The poem is ok but I don't really like it that much. It flows some and I get the message of the poem. It is a poem on a good ...

    Nov 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Eyes Of an Angel

    I don't really like this poem but that's my opinion on the poem. It flows well but the poem doesn't get my attention. I think that there needs to be ...

    Nov 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Grinding Myself Down

    I like the poem I understood the message the rythm I didn't get until a little while into the poem. I think that it's a good poem for people to ...

    Nov 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To a rose with no thorns. Sin Espinas

    I like the poem. the rhythm is good but is in the way. the message you can see but not completly. It's a lovely poem. "Deep dark desire. Hidden in ...

    Nov 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: soul-less blue eyes

    The title of the poem is a great one. I love the poem. It is interesting and unique. I like the sad theme. It flows well. There isn't much people ...

    Nov 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That I would be fine

    It is a great poem! I love it. It had a sad and dark love emotion. I like how it has to do with cutting and feeling like you are ...

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: heart strings

    The poem was great. It's filled with emotions and people will love this poem. It does flow well but in one part to me it didn't seem that it flowed ...

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: thriller don't turn on the light

    I love the story. it is so dramatic. I love the ending. you should write more to the story like that more people get killed and the killer should be ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a rose for the abused..

    I like the poem it reachs to people. I could image what was going on. I think that it did flow well but not so well in some places. the ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Untitled (for now)

    I loved that story. I write stories like that too and the story is just so heart touching to me. I think that story, people will love to read. I ...

    Oct 27, 2009


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