Kelsi222

Hey! Thanks for reading! But I was just wondering what you meant when you said the character seems fake?? Could you please tell me so I can fix it up?? ...

Yes, this was really well done!! Can't wait to read the rest! Keep up the great work!!!! Kelsi =)

Hey!! This was a really awesome story! I really enjoyed it! The ending was perfect. In my opinion, it was un-called for, but thats what made it so good! Keep ...

It's not junk! It's a very nice little story, though it would nice if it was a bit longer. But very well done!!! Kelsi =)

Thanks N, I'll remember all that!!! Bye =)

Hey, just a note to say Chapter Three is coming soon!!!!!!!! And can someone please R&R!!!! I would really like it!!!!!! Thanks!! Kelsi =)

I forgot to do that with the dialouge, our teacher had told us about that, but I forgot. Sorry. I get what you are saying with the agents. But her ...

Okay so here's Chapter Two, hope you guys like, it's not that long, but enjoy!! CHAPTER TWO!! I woke up the next morning with the sunlight of a new day ...

Hey! I think it was kinda good that it didn't have a resoultion. it made the readers think a bit more about it. Very good work!! Kelsi =)

Hey!! This was a very nice poem!! It did catch my eye and I'd liked reading it. I agree, you should make WAS italicized. Keep up the good work!!! Kelsi=)

I woke up the next morning with the sunlight of a new day streaming into my face through the light purple blinds. I rolled over and glanced at the white ...

Your welcome =)

Heyy!! This was a really good poem and a really nice idea!! I dont agree with it being any eye swore. I I'd like that you refrained the line "I ...

Hey! I really liked this. I was very well done. Also there was really nice comparision's like "the sky as deep as a sea and the water as clear as ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your poem! I don't have any crits, nor am I very good at them. Lol, well I thought it was very well donr. And I love ...