Kelsi222

Oh how I love love poems!! This was short, but like said above, no matter how short it is still a poem! And this was very creative, you worded it ...

This poem was amazing! I loved your comparsion of sex and loneliness. Very different but very true! Your first stanza was perfect! I opened up your opem to tell your ...

This was a good poem. But I have a couple things I'd like to point out: 1) This is a big pet peeve of mine, people not capitalizing their "I". ...

Hi, I really liked your story. I found it very interesting and highly amusing. My favorite character is Brooke. I loved when she couldn't get the bra undone. That was ...

Hey. I really really like this. It's sad, but it was very well written. I was believabel. Not sure if that is a good word to use, but I hope ...

Hey, I thought this poem was okay. Not my favourite, but I didn't hate it. I agree it had an impact on the reader, but it wasent tell the end ...

Hey, I also had mixed feelings on this. This was not my favourite song to read, but I think it could turn into something really cool. I like the path ...

I thought this was okay. I am not much of a song writer, but I really can't imange listen to this on the radio. I also agree with shanan-cat when ...

Hey, I liked you poem a lot. I found out about this tradgey around 8 last night. I called all my friends to tell them (I am probably the only ...

Hey! First off, I liked how you began every line with "you". I thought it gave the readers a sence of how much you disliked the person. And I dont ...

Hey!! I really liked your poem a lot! It was a good topic to talk about, espically since it's what a lot of teens go through in their teenage lives! ...

Hey!! I thought this was so, so perfect!! I wasent to to mushy, but it still had that litlle bit. I espically adored this line:[/quote] You kill me with that ...

Hey! I thought this was very well done. It was almost refreshing. I almost never hear stories like this any more. So it was nice to hear one again. I ...

Hey!! I really enjoyed this poem! It had amazing imagery in it! And you did a really great job in describing everything! I love the ending line. You did a ...

Hey! I was a little disappointed in this chapter. You didn't introduce the cutting in a very good way, actual you didn't introduce it at all. It was un-called for. ...