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Re: The Mind and the External World: an Oversimplified Peek into Locke’s Account
Oh, wow. I didn't actually expect an essay about John Locke and his proposal theorem about our sense and interaction of this external world. I honestly wouldn't say much of ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: Two little girls-Leona and Amelia’s song
I came here without reading or knowing anything about the"Town of Richardson" story but I seemed to have understood your lyrical art. I thought this at first should've been poetry, ...
Jul 22, 2022 -
Re: Apostle
Hello, this is Kelisot. I found your poem intriguing with the title "Apostle", which possibly can be a reference for a Greek-originating word meaning disciple. This may possibly refer to ...
Jul 19, 2022 -
Re: Eyes coal
Hi, this is Kelisot. I found your poetry interesting from the start of this title. The name Eye Coal can be interpreted in different ways, such as having the eyes ...
Jul 16, 2022 -
Re: and we are both bad astronomers
Hello, this is Kelisot for a review. I first liked your summary (or bio? what is it called?) of you complaining that it was hard to find Polaris. I liked ...
Jun 7, 2022 -
Re: What is Happiness?
I like this poetry-- it sounds like something said in slam poetry! I can agree that I could see the clear topic/subject of "happiness" throughout your poetry, and I like ...
Apr 8, 2022 -
Re: Know its valid.
That is... very deep. Never have thought in such an odd way like this. The disturbing subject of ignorance we can all agree upon is seriously heavy. I have some ...
Apr 8, 2022 -
Re: The Things You See
I LOVED THIS. Although I'm not the best person when it comes to English Literature, I loved the wordings you have used here. The concept of idealism and fear of ...
Mar 9, 2022 -
Re: Stupid puzzle
Hello, this is Kelisot just doing another review! Ah yes, love. Poetry about love always manages to be interesting for me. I enjoyed reading this poem, as the title itself ...
Mar 8, 2022 -
Re: The Purple Instructions
Hello, this is Kelisot doing a review for this interesting piece of poetry they've just found that's possibly from the imaginations of a fellow human being. That is if you ...
Feb 7, 2022 -
Re: the end
Hello, this is Kelisot here, and writing a review for a very long time. I'm not the best at writing techniques or using word-plays very well to engage an audience, ...
Feb 7, 2022 -
Re: cold-weather friends
Hello, Kelisot here! I'm not sure if this is your poem or you just found it on the Internet... however, whoever created this poem did a good job! Interestingly, this ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: bitter pill
Hello, this is Kelisot here, doing a review (because he needs points to publish more stuff and to support writers too!) I've also listened to the music and DAMN, you ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: untitled
Ooh, interesting-- I always love reading the stories of new people. Also, a welcome hug (or high five? What's better for you? By the way, it's virtual, not literal) to ...
Aug 24, 2021 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: A Prologue [old]
This story, already from he start, gave me a hook. A murder mystery? But a TRIPLE ? That really now has my attention. Especially the beginning, with this: “Are you ...
Aug 16, 2021
