Kaylyn

This is pretty good. I felt the same way in middle school. :) Okay, on to the review: You had a few spelling mistakes, but I am sure that you ...

My Life is a canvas Your Love is my paint Let your brush stroke me I'm open and blank Every time you say"I Love You" It's Paints a little More ...

I like the message...but it didn't flow that well. It didn't have that steady beat. Some of the stanzas were ackward. Maybe if you rephased some... I didn't see any ...

First off, this poem needs some editing. Your punctuation is a bit off, and you need to fix those mistakes. I like the message in the story, but its the ...

Its looking good, although it is a bit confusing with all the charcters introduced so quickly. I would suggest you slow it down some. Describe the ares and charcaters more. ...

Okay first off, I think you need more details. You also have a lot of showing instead of telling. So here goes your review. The sound of a constant annoying ...

Oh, I loved this. He did a great job. I loved the flow and rythm of it. It wanted to make me sing it out loud. He should be published. ...

Consumed in my thoughts. Just scattered and thrown not quite sure of myself and my strengths. I'm not sure how much I can endure. But I know I am strong. ...

Okay, you definately need to add more to this poem. It isn't substantial to have only this much in that type of poem. Be more descriptive. Your repeating half of ...

Lovely poem. Haven't seen anything like this in a while. I'ts nice to see something new. I didn't find anything wring with your grammar. You were descriptive, and I love ...

Heres your critique, FINALLY, I got to it. Okay, first off. No !? or other double ending punctuation like this, in your case it would have been! not ? because ...

This was a short poem, but then again there are a lot of those. Look at the Red Wheelbarrow. Its really short. Some are even two lines. But... I would ...

Okay, you have the basics down, but I believe that this poem could be great with some polishing up. Work on your grammar some. I noticed several words that were ...

First off before the critique: tay_star92 please turn your caps off. Okay, so here goes. The whole story was weird and confusing, and yet I love your writing style. I ...

Awesome poem, I couldn't pass this up from giving you the most lavish praise. I love your writing style. And I love ryhming poems, especially since you avoided making it ...