KatheryneAlyxandera

"The sense of touches the skin has felt" seems a little awkward to me. Try adjusting the wording to make it fit better. Punctuation could use a little work; the ...

This poem is very short and sweet. In my opinion, "You don't take a breath" seems a little out of place..Perhaps a re-wording, or something of the such? I think ...

This is beautifully written. I love the metaphors and similes used in this-absolutely fantastic. There is honestly nothing I would change about this. This is wonderfully written and lovely to ...

This is beautiful. The flow of this is wonderful. This is very realistic as well. It painted pictures in my head while I was reading. :) I like the usage ...

Wow, this is beautiful. I absolutely love this. The message behind this truly got me thinking, "Why live?". That is an excellent thing for an author to do, making their ...

Hello, I like this, however there are a few things I would change. :P "The path I walked carpeted All in faded colors, I stopped." That, to me, seems a ...

Hi there, I personally love this. I relate to this perfectly. Anyways, the shortness of this poem is perfect, and punctuation is spot on. The message behind this really hit ...

Hello, I'd like to start off by saying that the repetition of "Silly me" is a great way to suck the reader in. Repetitions in poems are surely something to ...

This is a great Mother's Day poem- I'm sure your mother will love it. Just one quick comment- in the line, "I apologize in advanced", there is just a simple ...