KatarinaLatisse

Entrancing piece! I can't give much helpful advice, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it. Good description, very unique. I liked the style and flow of the piece, ...

Wow, very intriguing! Captured my intrest and held it there. Beautifully done, a lot of wonderful description and emotion to your piece. I especially liked these lines... This beating is ...

Awesome poem! :D Well, I really enjoyed it, anyway... Not a lot of description in it, but simple and to the point, and I can still feel the emotions in ...

Wow, I just wanted to say it's amazing to read this, it almost exactly how I feel sometimes. Also the style and tone you wrote it in is just an ...

A really beautiful piece! :D I enjoyed reading it. I only found a few grammar errors, but nothing big. Yours disappearance is where it originates from. I think this would ...

Nice poem! :) It has an energy and feeling to it that really shares your emotions with the reader. I liked the quick, lively pace to it and really, the ...

Wow, this is really different than anything I'm used to, but I think that's why I like it! :) It catches my attention and stays in my head awhile, gives ...

Wow, I really liked this piece! :) The story it told was a little sad, yet entrancing, with a little spark of hope for the future. I liked how you ...

Short and sweet, a simple poem that caught my eye. I think the ending could have be a little different, it kind of was rushed and cut off quickly, but ...

Intriging poem! :) It really has an air of mystery about it. Nice rythym, but it was thrown a little off towards the end, at least for me. It was ...

Wow, very entrancing! This one quickly caught me in it and swept me away. It has a very melodic quality to it, smooth flowing and an easy rythym to follow. ...

Well, I liked how it was short and simple, but I'm not sure what was going on here. I kind of get the picture of someone sitting, smoking in a ...

Just thought I'd let you know that I enjoyed this piece! It was well put together and had a nice, smooth yet exciting flow to it. The only thing I ...

Just wanted to let you know, I really liked this. The way you used such description, as the reader I was able to feel your energy and really be able ...

I enjoyed your piece! :) It was short, yet had alot to it. It had a nice flow to it, a smooth rythym throughout. I few things left me wondering ...