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Re: Black Ice: Forward Pt 1/3
Ok, I'm gonna start this off with: Awesome Idea!!! XD It sounds very, very interesting!!! XD XD XD I can't wait for more! X3 Ofcourse, there are a few mistakes ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Parallel World
Although the idea is interesting, I find this a little confusing ^^'' What exactly happened? ^^ The best thing to do would be to slow down, and write it out ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: The Arc: Prologue
Hey WaW~chama ^u^ Ok, I like this ^^ I Really, Really like this ^^ Alot ^^ I particulally love how it starts in the begining as objective and all facts ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: I've been roaming around.
Ok, this is AWESOME!! ^u^ I love the message, the meaning, the theme, the words, the feeling. . .Heck, I love it all ^u^ I love how you compleatly executed ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: Run
This song is amazing ^^ But I agree with WAW that you could state genre and speed at the top, so we could see if the lyric would flow with ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: It's Been Far Too Long
Ok, this is simply amazing!! ^u^ I love how it implies a story, but doesn't go into so much detail that a listener couldn't really connect to it ^^ Trust ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: Little Voices
This is really good ^^ I like the whole gist of the poem ^^ Though, there were a few little blips I found; 1) "And yet again, you never looked ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: One Last Time
Ok, this is amazing ^^ It's such an awesome song ^^ I totally want to hear this with music; it would be epic ^u^ I love how it implies a ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: Trust Me
O.O Man, this is AWESOME!! ^u^ It totally gets through to the readers (listener's ^^'') emotions ^^ It's so poetic ^^ I really want to hear it to music ^^ ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: Eternal Ectasy- Chapter 2
Hey Aqua~chama ^^ So, I kept reading and I love this chapter too! ^u^ I love how you mention CardCaptor Sakura ^u^ (Syoran
Aug 12, 2012 -
Re: Eternal Ectasy-Chapter 1
Hey Aqua~chama ^^ Ok, so this sounds totally awesome ^^ It's a very intresting idea and very original ^^ I've nevre heard of a 7th sense before reading the prolouge ...
Aug 12, 2012 -
Re: Eternal Ectasy-Chapter 1
Hey Aqua~chama ^^ Ok, so this sounds totally awesome ^^ It's a very intresting idea and very original ^^ I've nevre heard of a 7th sense before reading the prolouge ...
Aug 12, 2012 -
Re: Wicked (prologue)
Okay, this prologue is amazing too! ^u^ It's written like the main character is actually talking to you. Ya, I know that's what first person is, but this piece in ...
Jun 26, 2012 -
Re: An Account of the End of a Planet
Ok, this is amazing ^^ I love the point of view the person in this writing has on earth, or what I guess is supposed to be earth ^^ At ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 2 of Chapter 1.
Hey again ^^ just reading my way down the line of your works Cause I Love This So Much!!! ^u^ Seriously, I can't find one grammar or spelling flaw in ...
Jun 25, 2012