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Kanome

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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter three: Chains (Flash fiction)

    Hello .. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, this chapter is where everything becomes intense. I can see this story has potential, and I believe it will become ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter two: The cave (Flash fiction)

    Hello .. Kanome here with a review for you. This second chapter was good, but it still needs a little more work. I see that you transitioned from one character ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter one: A Human (Flash fiction)

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. This first chapter of this story is very intriguing to me. I love the how the names of your characters are so ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Silent.

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Personally and honestly, I have heard of Doctor Who, but I never seen the episodes. So I am sorry if I screw ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Princess~Part 5

    Hello, Pinkie. Kanome here with a review for you. I like this story so far, but this chapter needs some serious proofreading and revising. Nitpicks: - Commas were needed in ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Humor Re: Germaphobia

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I love the poem honestly. It shows how some people are actual cleaner than others, and that they care about their health ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Stole Your Words

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. Even though it's short, it's straight to the point. I love this poem because you wrote this from the heart, especially for a certain ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Brothers

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I love this short story. Love triangle? Best kind of story ever if I may add. - Who would she choose? - ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 1

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. This poem is really sweet and romantic. I love how you used the moon to symbolize the love between a couple. The ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: I love you.

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I noticed that this is in the "other" category... is this not a poem? Anywho, I liked this piece. It's saddening, but ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: My First Poem: Family

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I remember reviewing your other poem c: I also said I liked this poem too, so I am going to review it ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual Re: Solidarity

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. This poem is saddening yet interesting. It's based on teenagers who only want to go back to their families. I've seen stuff ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Poem: A World Full of Fantasy

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I personally like this poem. Not only because it was well-written, it's also because it comes from the heart. I know this ...

    Jul 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Road of Stars Ch2

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I like this chapter so far. I don't think I read the first chapter. I don't remember honestly. From the looks of ...

    Jul 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Remaining Survivors: Chapter Two

    Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I don't remember reading the first chapter, but I did read the prologue of this. This chapter is really good, but I ...

    Jul 3, 2014


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