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Kanome

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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    Hello, Kanome here with a review. I like this poem because I saw what you did there, on the title and in the poem itself. I love how you explain ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Denial

    Hello, Kanome here with a review. Wow, the climax in this story scared me just now... I love the whole concept of this short story. I love the graphic detail ...

    Apr 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: just an echo

    Hello, Kanome here with a review. Okay, I love the aspect of the poem, and I love the self-expression it gives about a depressed teenager. I can relate to this ...

    Apr 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: so cliched!

    Hello, Kanome here with a review. I love the cliché lines for each person you placed here. It really caught my interest, and honestly, this is a great poem even ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hourglass shatters.

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. Okay, I started reading this and I was like... "What the h*** just happened there?" I don't know why but the first line really ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Other » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Dear People-Who-Are-Not-Shy

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. It seems as though you're speaking out for the shy people everywhere, which is amazing, because you have focus that you want people to ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Mid-September

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. I would like to personally say, that, I don't know how it feels to be a fall baby, but I do know what depression ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: His Memory Never Fades(not a true story)

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. This story... really caught my interest. There was intense emotion between the main character and her best friend, Tribute. I love the closeness of ...

    Apr 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tears of Rainbows

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. This poem became hopeful in the end. It just means that there is a light for anyone who is in the darkness, sad and ...

    Apr 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Fractured Hour - Part I

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. I personally enjoyed this story. It gave the main character's dislikes, which was one of the main points in the story. The ending left ...

    Apr 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: The Trickster, Prologue and part of 1st Chapter

    Hello. Kanome here with a review. Sooo... as far as I could see, this story is about paranormal. I like the plot of the story, but this needs a little ...

    Apr 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Squirrel!

    Hello. Kanome here with review. Okay, this poem is very interesting, but it lacks the expression it needs. I couldn't really follow through about what the whole poem was about. ...

    Apr 6, 2015
  • Other » Other, General Re: An Ode to Alliteration

    Hello. I don't know if this would count as a review.... but, I am going to try. Hmm.. seems like you have a problem with alliteration. Is that what they ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: My Existence!

    Hello, Doni. Kanome here with a review for you. Well, this poem really makes me feel a bit sad on the inside. Especially because this is how I personally feel ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love's Challenges

    Hello, Kanome here with a review for you, Doni. I have to say, that I truly agree with this piece. If an effort for a love to exist, it takes ...

    Apr 1, 2015


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