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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 2: The day I recognized myself.

    Hello! I'm back! :D And what did I say about this character? Yes, indeed she turns out to be a really hard worker. And a mother. I already admire this ...

    Sep 15, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 2

    Hello! I know, I know, I'm going back to those old chapters but I feel like in order to properly review for you I need to go back in time. ...

    Sep 14, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: The day I recognized myself

    Heyo! This piece caught my interest and here I am to review it!! I review as I go. Let's get started! The opening line instantly drew me in. I can ...

    Sep 13, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 8

    Hello! I am back after a century and jumping right in to the first green room chapter that caught my attention xD. As always, I will be reviewing as I ...

    Sep 12, 2024

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Oh

    Hello! This piece grabbed my attention and here I am to review it. Took me three reads to get the full richness out of this poem. Let's begin. circle, a ...

    Sep 11, 2024

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative
    Re: Boot Camp

    Hello! I am here to review this piece for you! I review as I go. Let's get started, shall we? The splat of mud greeted his face as he fell ...

    Sep 10, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: Everbound : Chapter Two The Satanic Method. Part 2.1.

    Hello! I have arrived! And I'm going to try out a new review method! What glitters! You did a really great job with some of your descriptions. You set the ...

    Sep 9, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: you & all the dates i should not forget

    Hello! I'm here to review this wonderful poem. I will be reviewing as I read (a second and third time most likely

    Sep 8, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Flames Of Vendetta Part 1

    Hello! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I go. Let's get into it! First impressions: I have to say that opening line was really ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Mad- Chapter 2

    Hello, hello! I have come to review this little piece I noticed in the green room. I review as I go. Let's get into it! The tea was made of ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction
    Re: Bliss Was Ignorance: Chapter 2

    There was no way to remove the OpticLens chip from her brain without the risk of permanent damage, so they left it there. Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. WHAT?? Okay before ...

    Sep 5, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 8 The travel of self Part 1

    Greetings! I have come to review for you. As always, I will be reviewing as I read. Here goes! So the opening line I felt was just a little weak. ...

    Sep 4, 2024


  • Hello, herbs. It is time I reviewed for a friend. Here goes! As always, I review as I read. Let's go! So first I had to look over the format ...

    Sep 3, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 7

    Hello! Tryna keep up with RevMo and stumbled upon this piece. So here comes a review for yah! I will be reviewing as I go like I always do :D ...

    Sep 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 1

    Greetings! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I read so this review will be in chronological order. Shall we begin? All right. I love ...

    Sep 1, 2024


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