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Re: Me Time..
Hello! I have arrived to review for you! Let's get started! I found this poem to be quite relatable as a recent nursing graduate, I never failed to feel this ...
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Re: disposable cup
Hello! Saw you post this and needed to swing by to give this a read so here I am :D I am a review as I go type of person ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 6
Hello! I'm back! Let's get into it, shall we? I guess hearing back from these people isn't going to happen in a moment. Very realistic. And the fact that Jarid ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 5
All the participants gathered in the center of the arena and waited for some sort of explanation of the trial ahead. Andddd we're back! I have to say (sorry for ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 4
Heyo! I have returned! :D Let's see. It looks like my first suggestion here would be to try to limit the number of "has" and "had" incidences that I'm seeing. ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 3
Anndd we're back! Let's hop right in! By the time Jarid got to the arena, there was still plenty of time before the start of the test. Jarid noticed a ...
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Re: Chapter 2: The day I recognized myself.
Hello! I'm back! :D And what did I say about this character? Yes, indeed she turns out to be a really hard worker. And a mother. I already admire this ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 2
Hello! I know, I know, I'm going back to those old chapters but I feel like in order to properly review for you I need to go back in time. ...
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Re: The day I recognized myself
Heyo! This piece caught my interest and here I am to review it!! I review as I go. Let's get started! The opening line instantly drew me in. I can ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 8
Hello! I am back after a century and jumping right in to the first green room chapter that caught my attention xD. As always, I will be reviewing as I ...
Sep 13, 2024 -
Re: Oh
Hello! This piece grabbed my attention and here I am to review it. Took me three reads to get the full richness out of this poem. Let's begin. circle, a ...
Sep 12, 2024 -
Re: Boot Camp
Hello! I am here to review this piece for you! I review as I go. Let's get started, shall we? The splat of mud greeted his face as he fell ...
Sep 10, 2024 -
Re: Everbound : Chapter Two The Satanic Method. Part 2.1.
Hello! I have arrived! And I'm going to try out a new review method! What glitters! You did a really great job with some of your descriptions. You set the ...
Sep 9, 2024 -
Re: you & all the dates i should not forget
Hello! I'm here to review this wonderful poem. I will be reviewing as I read (a second and third time most likely
Sep 8, 2024 -
Re: Flames Of Vendetta Part 1
Hello! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I go. Let's get into it! First impressions: I have to say that opening line was really ...
Sep 8, 2024
