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KaiRyu

Just when I thought it couldn't get more awkward....

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Five Years Now

    Yolo peoples! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review!!!! Now, I'm no expert on poems, so if I said something that's wrong, just ignore it, happens all the time... I love ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: A Doctors Visit

    Yo peoples!!!!! LadyRanicorn here! For this one, I totally agree with Kaila, it is truly a well written story. I have one thing to say that's negative though, what was ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue

    What be the up peoples????? LadyRanicorn back another review, awsome title pic by the way... I LOVE how you made this plot line go, absolutly LOVE it!!! A couple of ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Phantom

    Hello, LadyRanicorn here for an amazing review for this AMAZING story. ;) I absolutely love the topic, I LOVE LOVE LOVE Phantom!!!! I like how the topic is different because ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Action / Adventure Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 20: The Road to Camp is One Filled with Walking and Rocks

    Hello Ladybug that just so happens to be a holograph! ;) Been a long time since I wrote a review on one of your writings... Well I be back for ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 4.1

    This is KaiRyu back for another awsome review peoples!!!! Loved the plot line, especially when the guy got it totally wrong about Johnny and Magdeline, could totally feel the embarrassment ...

    Feb 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 3.2

    Hello SnazzyPencil!!! I'm here for review(obviously). I love how you focuse more on the backround characters on this one, like how her mom stated random facts when she was stressed, ...

    Feb 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Survives: Prologue

    :):):):)!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!!! This is such a awe inspiring book. It reflects most of my reason. I would gladly join the Resistance.:) This has Maximum Ride written all over ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Memoir

    If this is a story of your earlier years, then, I totally understand what you went through. My case wasn't as severe as yours, but it was still bullying. My ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 2.1

    Okay SnazzyPencil I have to ask you this, when are you going to add the part about the child on the loose. Honestly, this has nothing to do with the ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: your hands set me afire

    You forgot to capitalize the I... Besides that it's pretty cooleo. I only read the first sentance and could tell that I was going to love it!!! It is AMAZING!! ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Drabble #01

    Hey, Turtle. Awsome story you got here, for some strange reason it reminds me a lot of my personal life. I mean, how people don't like it when I laugh ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 1.2

    Not that I dont love your writing, BUT WHY DO YOU LEAVE SO MUCH SUSPENSE??:) Its killing me here! Okay, on the less crazy side, I really love your type ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 28

    Hey whatever your name is, love the story and the way that your main character is different, but I have to say, why is there at least one Isabelle in ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Prologue

    I love the suspense!!!! It is absolutly AMAZING!!! I love how you planned out the plot(heh, funny to say, isn't it? Sounds like a rap...) I love how you described ...

    Feb 1, 2016


As a writer, I'm more interested in what people tell themselves happened rather than what actually happened.
— Kazuo Ishiguro