KLovelace

Hm, well I'm K here to review, hopefully this will be helpful to you! First, I'll start with my first opinions- as a poetry person who enjoys the kind of ...

Huh. Well, I'm K here to review your poem! I hope this is helpful. First comment- it's so short. Dx but the shortness fits it. Although, since it is so ...

Hi I'm K here to review your poem, I hope this is helpful to you! First, this line- "pour boiling stars onto trespassers" is so beautiful. I love it. Out ...

Hello, I'm K here for a review! Hopefully this will be helpful. To begin, I'd like to start with your word choice. To me, there could be a lot of ...

Hi, I'm K here to review your poem! I hope this is helpful

Oh... I love this poem. I've been suffering from loneliness for a long time as well :c That's actually why I joined YWS, and it's helped me a little! Well, ...

Hello, I'm K here to review your piece! Hopefully this will be helpful

Everyone else seemed to review all the same comments I had, but i want to elaborate on something Sushi said. You're very direct and almost too informative in your writing. ...

Hello, I'm K and hopefully this review will be helpful! My big comment is about the structure of your poem as a whole. To me, it didn't make any sense. ...

Hi, I'm K and hopefully this review will be helpful! The first thing I noticed was that you should probably try to work with your punctuation and change it around ...

Hello, I'm K and hopefully this review will be helpful to you! Some small things first, you forgot a space in the line, "What will I have without you?" and ...

Hello, I'm K here to review your prologue! The thing that sticks out to me the absolute most and bothers me the most is your change of tense. "But not ...

Hello! I'm K, and hopefully my review of your poem will be helpful! I like the short sweetness of it, and how it tells a complete story through only a ...

This poem is really deep, and I can sense the emotions you put into it. And considering the emotions, I'll try to give the best advice I can while still ...

Hi, I'm K and hopefully my review will be helpful to you! Alright, so one of my major comments is that the way you order your lines stops the flow ...