Justlittleoleme2

Hey there Vetas! Just little ole me here! :3 I want to start out by saying that this is indeed a topic that most people can relate to. We all ...

Hey there CaptainPanda! I want to start out by saying that I LOVE sci-fi. Absolutely cannot get enough of the stuff. ^-^ So I was glad to see your story ...

I want to start out by saying that I really like the style of this poem, and they way it matches with the characters and what's being said. I tried ...

Hey there Zotara, welcome to deviant art! ^-^ Horror really isn't my genre, but I will give it a shot. For one, I think the idea of the monster under ...

Hi there! I want to start by pointing out all of the details I liked in this story. For one, it's a dog story and dog stories are always fun. ...

Hey there! I will start out by saying that this feels like the start of a book... as in, a book I could pick up at the library, or on ...

Powerful little poem here, emotional and gritty. All I have are a few grammar quips: /quote/I just want you to get one think straight"/quote/ "Think" needs to be "thing". /quote/For ...

Hello :) Justlittleoleme here, Let me start out by saying that there is absolutely nothing wrong with this ... except for the fact that it isn't finished(at least for the ...

Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story. I'm not Spanish, but as a kid who grew up far away from most of my family, especially my older ...

I find this to be a very impressive bit of rambling. Very reminiscent to my own thoughts... only, I guess mine are a little more optimistic. To answer your last ...

I was told there would be butterflies! Where are the butterflies?! ;) All joking aside. While the subject matter makes me queasy cringey, the writing is very well done. Not ...

This is a fine little poem, with nice imagery. I especially love the first stanza. Pure poetry! ^.^ I couldn't find any grammar issues to speak of, but overall I ...

This is a very solid bit of writing. I enjoyed the message very much. It was communicated clearly, and was well crafted. I can't find any grammar mistakes, although some ...

Hello. ^.^ Interesting little story you have hear. You language structure, and word usage are creative, and lyrical, but odd. It made me think of something beautiful that should be ...

Often times I find love poetry cliche, but this, this is something else. In fact his little poem you have written here is a rare and beautiful specimen of poetic ...