Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.
So, first thing I notice is that well, I think most things were covered by others and like the others, I just LOVED the line "void, unveiled of veneer;" It just mixed so well together and it is so much fun to say aloud to ones self! The flow was terrific too.
Now is when I dissect your poem and see if I can't get its meaning right! So, in your poem you are telling us, the reader, that you know some who you love talking to. You like their little quirks and things alike. You like the fact that they are themselves. You have no explanation and that is perfectly fine! Just his presence can make your day and his voice is comforting to you, no?
Overall I loved the poem and keep up the good work! Happy Halloween! I really need to go now Grim has souls to reap and he needs more cocoa. He has a problem, seriously. Cheerio and fruit loops to you!
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