Juniper

Bonjour, Pickle, Juniper at your service, I can infer from this poem that the narrator has died and wants the person he/she observes to join them once again. However, I ...

Audy, I am a admirer of your poetry, and a lover of your way with words. I make a point of reading your poetry-- whether I review it or not. ...

Hey there! I'm Juniper, I don't like to give myself an expectation of a poem before I actually read it, but the title of this poem is absolutely lovely, and ...

Hi, Blackwood! June here, Well, this was quite an interesting change of pace from all of the literature I've been wading through this morning. I'm not sure how I feel ...

Hi there, Smile, I'm June, The title of your poem is listed as "Im me", and I want to point out to you that it should properly be "I'm me", ...

Hi there, demib, I'm Juniper, Even though this poem opens with a redundant couple of lines, I like it. The shortness of this poem is refreshing, especially because it's not ...

Hi there, I'm June, I can infer where you were trying to take this poem, but there are several things about it that I want to address. • To begin, ...

Howdy there, I'm June. After seeing you do some good damage in the forums, I figured the least I could do was pay you a review. I must start by ...

Adna, I told you before, and I'll tell you again, you have a way with words that strikes me as absolutely beautiful. You tell this story in fragments, but it ...

Mayyda, I like the factual directness of this poem and I appreciate how concise it is. You did an excellent job maintaining a decent rhyme scheme throughout this poem, dear, ...

Hi, Alliyah, An old friend of mine used to write poems like this, one that could be read backwards and forwards, and I admit that they're enjoyable in their own ...

Hi Whisperer, I'm June, I like this poem for it's easy rhyme scheme and it's organization. Right off the bat I'll tell you that I don't understand the italics-- poetry ...

Hi PumpkinCat, June here! It's really good to see some work from you, but I have to say, this poem might have a better effect on me if you read ...

Hi Raven, I'm June, The problem I'm having with this poem is that it feels like you are trying so hard to keep a rhyme scheme, that whatever you're trying ...

Hello, Rishabh, I'm June. Structurally speaking, I don't know what to make of this poem. I was trying to like the pattern of end-of-line repeated in the beginning-of-the-next-line repetition, but ...