Juniper

Hi, Adeera, June here, I'm not too sure that the elements that you've constructed your poem out of are working to your advantage. Because you chose to structure your poem ...

Hey there, Mr Sillie, I'm June, I think this poem is a certain kind of cute, but there are some things about it that I don't think work too well. ...

Mm, fresh meat. *rubs hands together* Don't allow yourself to preface your works with things that will make your audience of critics want to tear it apart; it really takes ...

Hi, Blackbird, June here, On first read, I thought that this was a bit a bit of an overused theme to follow, but I think this has more than you ...

Hey, Disco, June here, I liked where you were going at the beginning. While I think that in terms of structure, you could do better because the meter in the ...

Very cute, Demmie, (While I can understand morse, I cheated and used the translator, because reading it isn't quite the same as hearing it... :P) I don't have any negative ...

Hey Moo! Overall, I think the idea of the kindness here will work wonderfully for a poem, but I don't think that the way you've wrote it makes it fit ...

Hi, Pepper, It's good to see that your poetry has come ways stylistically! Your formatting isn't terrible here, but for the length of your lines, I think that this could ...

Hey there, June here, I'm not too sure if I like this poem or not. I think that you might be able to go places with it if you rework ...

Hi, Kitrosemon, I think that you have something you can easily work with here, but your images, though they hold a lot of potential, are kind of clouded amongst each ...

Hey, Hailey, I'm not too sure how much I like this poem, and I can't exactly pinpoint why. I think that there is a lot of room for elaboration here, ...

Hi, Aki, Kudos to you on writing an emotional poem based on a touchy topic. I have to say that you did a fair job in terms of what you ...

My favorite Sammattoo, I haven't read works of yours in quite a while; it's in fact refreshing to see you've writ something. The problem that I am having here is ...

Hi, Megg, Usually, I am very picky about rhyming poems -- it's hard to find one that rhymes, is consistent in both rhyme and meter and follows a perfect structure. ...

Hey, Jagged, I can't say that prior to now, I've read any of your poetry, or anything of yours, for that matter. As far as first impressions go, this is ...