Juniper

Hi Peggy, it’s June here as requested. My first impression of this piece was that there was a lack of clarity in how you delivered your storytelling. I think you’re ...

Hey, tGirl, June here, This poem leaves me with a lot of questions. I want to know what makes this character want to express their inability to be a hero-- ...

Hey there, Vryx! I'm June, I think this poem is cute and sweet, but borders on the line of cliche. The thing is, poetry is one of the most common ...

Hi IntelligentQuill! June here! Cats are my absolute favorite animal (if my avatar didn't give that away already), so anything involving a cat is sure to be an instant favorite ...

Hi again, dark, here as promised. :) Are you writing poetry about all of the elements? I like the way this poem takes on a similar structure to the one ...

Hey, dark! I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours before. I think this is cute-- it reminds me of the poetry you find in children's magazines like Highlights, ...

Hi rbt. I'm going to call you ribbit. :) Loneliness is a common emotion, one that most, if not all people experience at some point in their life. Writing poems ...

Hey there, Journalist! June here. I really like the kind of ideas your bring to the table in your poem, but more often than not, I find myself wishing you ...

Hi Ka67! I'm June! I think that poetry is an excellent way to express yourself, especially when you're battling heavy emotions. However, too often do people try to write about ...

Hey there, Forest! Good to see you still around. June here, I think you have some good ideas hiding in this poem, but I get the feeling that you're forcing ...

Hey BlackWood, June here, I think this poem has potential, but I don't think you're reaching it here. I'm not sure about the way the poem opens-- the narrator cries ...

Hi, Annie! I'm June! (My big sister's name is Annie. :) It's such a lovely name. ) I really, really adore the way you opened this poem. It tiptoed slowly ...

Hi, Styx of Art, I'm June, I think that you're onto something here with an idea, but you don't see it through well enough to the end. Love stories are ...

Hi Emilie, I'm June, You open the poem with "I feel death as a strong emotion," which opens a door of expectation for your audience. I expected to see you ...

Hey there, Jessa, June here, I'm a huge fan of narrative poetry, but I don't know what to take away from this poem. I'm going to jump the gun here ...