Junel

Hey there! This is a very interesting poem. First my suggestions for edits: Ok, so first of all although I think your formatting looks cool, it breaks up the flow ...

Hey there! Woah, I seriously am in love with this, and I probably can't state it enough. My grandfather was a pilot in WWII so I seriously am in love. ...

Hey there, Junel here for a review day review! This is definitely an interesting topic and one I've spent a lot of time thinking about as I myself an a ...

Hey there, Junel here for a review day review! Normally I try to at least skim previous chapters, if not review them, but I'm not doing that today. So if ...

Hey there, Junel here for a review day review! Normally I try to at least skim previous chapters, if not review them, but I'm not doing that today. So if ...

Hey there, Junel here for a review day review! This is very interesting. It's setting the scene for the story ahead, giving us the perfect amount of background information in ...

Hey there! Junel here for a review day review! First, the not so fun nitpicks and suggestions: Ok, so my first thought when I opened this and saw your first ...

Hey there! First Nitpicks: Then he jokingly said, again, to himself, “Ah, oh well. Time for a date with a dead man,” followed by a snicker.[/quote The bolded part is ...

Hey there! This is a great start, really pulling the reader in. First Nitpicks and suggestions: You have a lot of numbers in your story, especially in the beginning. If ...

Hey friend! Lovely story you've got here! First Nitpicks: yay! but during the holidays was a different story. add it in the middle here and those people , for me ...

Hey there! Great title, it really pulled me in and interested. First nitpicks: “Well in that case, here is the picnic basket. I already prepared some finger sandwiches for you ...

Hey there! This is great! First off, the formatting of this is a bit hard on the eyes. Long paragraphs can quickly deter readers. The previous reviewer did cover this ...

Hey there! This is an amazing start and I can't wait to read more. First: the nitpicks The call was a slightly high-pitched young male voice that she'd been wondering ...

Hey there! This is super amazing, it has an amazing message and you make what you have portrayed about each character make them quite difficult to fully understand until the ...

Woah. You finished it, and I'm impressed. You've accomplished the perspectives of both in an amazing way. First I have a question on this line... I don't get very far. ...