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Aww, This poem was unfair! x) I was literally swooning over the guy in the beginning of your poem, I really wasn't expecting the twist at the ending. \ "A ...

I like it, it was cute and lyrical. Though I think it was a little bit cheesy in the second part: "She's my snuggle And cuddle, My sweet lullaby, My ...

Oh wow, I really really liked your poem, it was has really raw emotions. Also the title, so fitting. "the space between my fingers ached, like the breath between the ...

This was really cute, it has a lyrical feeling to it, it really makes it easy to follow. I also really enjoyed that you somehow chose a theme and followed ...

Hey, I though it was a really nice and sweet poem, I really liked that you called him superman, because, aside from what the poem says, you give away he ...

Great poem i really liked it You blame it on the person who knew all along I think that maybe it should say: who knew IT all along Yes, as ...

I really liked this poem Every night interrupt my steady sleep Though I do think that something's missing in between this two lines. what interrupted the steady sleep? other than ...

I really liked this, it definitely doesn't end how i was expecting it too. I loved the lines Like a child in a department store, hidden among the many rows ...

Hi, i think this is very good, it had a lot of emotions and it's really centered, though i do think you need to polish it up. you can maybe ...