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Hey! Lil' review: This is kind of a lovely story. The concept is interesting: what if no one could cry? It's certainly interesting, because those who can't might leave so ...

Heyo! Stopping by to leave my thoughts. The prose is good. Really good, in my opinion. You are able to convey beautiful imagery through your words. That first paragraph sent ...

Hey! Figured I’d review this thing because this would be a BOP. First off, allow me to complement this song as a whole. The devil-may-care attitude throughout the lyrics is ...

Hey, Plume! Just wanted to drop by and give a review, because I think this deserves it. This sort of gives me the vibes of your “letters I will never ...

Hey, Lizzy! (Is it okay if I call you Lizzy? I’m sorry if it’s not, it won’t happen again if it’s bad *sweats*) I just wanted to review this poem. ...

Hey! I guess I’ll review this. I think I actually can relate to this. It kinda of reminds me of intrusive thoughts, but also following up on those intrusive thoughts? ...

Hello! Wanna drop by real quick and give a review! So this is a cool poem. I think I was hit really hard by that last line. From the title, ...

Hey! I'm gonna try to review this thing. I don't know what it's like to be Muslim in America. So I hadn't really examined that perspective before. But this poem ...

Hello! So I read the first part of this, and now this is the second. As I hoped, the plot thickens. Nancy seems like a sweet girl, and Jay... Jay ...

Hey! You know, I like this story. It has no typos or grammatical errors that I can see, which I appreciate. And I like the sort of passive writing style ...

Hey! I know I haven’t reviewed anything of yours in a long time, and I haven’t really talked to you in a long time, either, and I’m sorry. You are ...

Hey! This is a cool start. Benin seems like a regular guy with his dog, riding home from somewhere, and his car is struck by lightning. Usually cars protect against ...

Hi! I saw this and although you already seem to have a lot of feedback, I figured I'd add what I think. Hopefully it's not too repetitive. :D I thought ...

Hey! You wanted a review, so... I'll do the best I can. This truly is about sand. It describes the textures of sand, how it feels, where it is, even ...

Hey! Imma leave another review on another poem of yours. It's a short poem, and I don't think I have any critiques (since I know grammar/punctuation stuff is probably stylistic), ...