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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: It's Complicated Pt. 4

    Hey, Here for a review, and I have to say you made it sorta hard to pick things out! :) Most of it looks flawless to me! And Its very ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: You'll never miss the water until the well runs dry

    Hey, Josie here to write a review!!! "Leaving me with, at firstshock, and later memories of the time we shared." Space between "firstshock" :) "The sorrow took over me as ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: [reworking] ch. 2

    Hey, Josie here to write a review! Im back after a week or so of not writing any reviews, so I feel really rusty right now!!! :P I hope I ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Twelve Hour Gangs (opinion needed)

    Hey Josie here for a review!!! :) So I just read you Plot Outline! Im very interested to see how it turns out...:P So Im going to read what you ...

    Dec 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: FLY

    Hey there! Josie here to review!!! :) This was a sweet little poem! Easy to read, didnt go on forever rambling, yet it wasnt super short! I liked it! :) ...

    Dec 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Second Always Comes Last: Counsellor

    Hello there! :) Im Josie, writing a review, hope its helpful! :) By-the-way I think Shane up to the point I have read is amazing...;) I think Im getting one ...

    Dec 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Genkii Chapter 3

    Hey!!! Josie here to review! :) "The black haired young man was the son of the one of the original founders, but nobody cared about his lineage." take out "of ...

    Dec 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Here I am

    Hey! Josie here to review! I don't actually have many suggestions! I think you did a fantastic job with this! I loved it! The only thing that I think I ...

    Dec 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Infected Chronicles Chapter Two

    Hey! Thanks for the trigger warning! I dont know how to do it either, but thanks for at least giving us a heads up? "My teeth was slightly stained yellow ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Guilt of a 5 years old boy!!!

    Hey! Its great that you got right in here and posted something! For several reasons Im not going to post for a while longer. But I think its great that ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Satire, Other Re: Chomp

    Hey...:D Here I am, I promised to review! ;) Just took me a little while to get other things done. ;) Well.... :D haha when I said I would come ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.11.

    Hey Burrow! Ok here to write a review! :) Looking forward to this chapter since I read the few ones before! I am coming in at the middle of the ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The hospital

    Hey!!! :) Josie here for a review! Im excited about reviewing this post cause Im very interested in this horror part!!! :) I love reading horror but dont find true ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: If I Could Go Back In Time

    Hey... here for a review! :) This is only my second review for lyrical. But Im starting to really look forward to it!!! :) Verse 1: The shadows of my ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Over the bridge

    Hey!!! Josie here! Writing a review! This was a very interesting little thing here! :) I notice that you didnt put it in any category! I liked it. But the ...

    Nov 30, 2014


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