JosephBohnenberger

Wow usually short poetry like that does not set me off and in the beggining of this piece I thought it was going to be the same until I read ...

Yea I agree! Like I tell everyone else, the main thing people look for in publishing now of days is Imagery and you show pleanty of that in your poem. ...

I was a bit confused reading this the first time. I read it once more and I started to get it, very well written poem. New and orginal and that's ...

I don't think I am going to give you a review that is longer then the poem so here we go. It was a very good poem, now there could ...

Well it is a good poem. Just remember poetry doesnt always have to rhyme, I think maybe if you less rhymed it could of been a bit better but overall ...

Just great! Very well writen poem, the rhythm just set me to ease and the rest just went on. These are the types of poems I like to read, the ...

Very very good poem, it had a mystery behind it making the readers think. I love the line "My muscles screeching like an engine!" This has to be one of ...

I really do like this poem! It had a nice sway to it, now I also agree with the last review but I disagree with one thing. People like stanza, ...

It is really a great poem but let me give some friendly advice that even I have problems with, like the last review I think you should go furthur in ...

Very well writen poem. I sort of get it but I feel as if your imagery is not so creative. You need to make it like I was there and ...

It's an okay writing, it does make me want to read the beggining two pages but let me give you some friendly advice. Do not be always so direct with ...

Because this story meant so much to you it made it even better, most people in these days right poems just for the entertainment but personally I like Poems that ...

One of my favorite I have seen all day! This is my first time ever reading a poem that tells a story like this one. The last stanza sets it ...

This poem has great imagery, I can tell that maybe you have some connection to it. In the beggining I was confused but as I read on it just kept ...

Great song. If your trying to publish this song it might be hard, I have learned from several publishers for my books that now of days they are looking for ...