Jony

Hey, I think this is a really good poem and I like the interesting format/ punctuation you chose to use, I think it helps things flow a little more. I ...

Hey, so I liked this poem very much! It's a little simple but I think it just adds to the charm and makes it easier to read and understand. I ...

Hey, so I think this is a really nice poem and while I may not be an avid poetry reviewer, I will try my best to make this a good ...

Hey, so to start this review off, I would suggest breaking up the text so its not just a giant block of text, it makes it easier to read and ...

Hey! First of all, I just wanted to say that Muse is an awesome band and it's awesome that the title of your work is also a Muse reference! Sorry, ...

Hey! You requested a review in my thread so I am more than happy to oblige. Lets get started. First off, I think that you could of built more in ...

Hi! Since your the first person to have requested a review on my thread, I'm going to try my best to make this a great review. First off I'm going ...

Hey! Wow I love this piece a lot. I think that your a great writer and your piece has so much beautiful imagery and great dialogue and it all just ...

Hey! Wow I loved this poem a lot! I think the idea behind the poem was very creative and it made me smile the whole way through. I love the ...

Hey! I like this story so far! I think that this story has a lot of potential. I haven't found much in terms of grammer, but then again I'm not ...

Hey! Nice job! I'm liking this story a lot and I have to say chapter 2 seems more polished and well, easier to read and comprehend than chapter one. I ...

Hi! Wow, this is really great! First off I guess I will start by welcoming you to YWS, I'm also a new(ish) member here. Sorry if this comes off a ...

Hey! Great job on your first post, I liked it very much so. I am also a new(ish) member on YWS so I want to say that this is definitely ...

I love your writing style! I think you have a very nice and descriptive writing style. I don't have much in terms of criticism except for some simple grammar mistakes ...

Okay, I like what I've read so far. I'll start off with the positive parts of the story (Don't worry there is more positive than negative.) I like how you ...