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Re: The Body of Time
Hey! First of all, I have to say; wow. This is such an amazing poem, I loved it, the language you used to paint your images was beautiful. I loved ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Deep Pool
Hey! I have to say that I really enjoyed this poem, it is very flowing and well written. I loved the way it flowed and how every line stayed consistent ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Time I Fought Death
Hey, I have to say that I think this a very simple, yet cool and unique poem you have written here. I enjoyed the underlying message of human nature and ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: ???Checking out me history
Hey! I have to say that what I have read so far has intrigued me. To start off with, and this may be a bit obvious, but you should definitely ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: everyone, everyone, no one, no one.
Hey, I have to say that this is a very original poem, and I enjoyed reading it very much. To start off with, I would get rid of the unnecessary ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Me
Hey! So I have to say that this is a very simple poem, but I enjoyed the larger theme behind it. To start off with, I really enjoyed the theme ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Where have I been?
Hey! I have to say, this is a very interesting poem, and it drew me in straight from the start. To start off with, as I mentioned before, I think ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Peaceful Destruction
Wow, I have to say that I really enjoyed this poem and I think your use of metaphors is amazing. Great job! So to start off with, I really enjoyed ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: loveholic
Hey! I have to say I really liked this piece, it was a topic that is a bit of a cliche in the world of poetry, but it was done ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Noose
Hey, so to start off, I have to say I really loved the way everything flowed so smoothly and the rhyming didn't sound choppy. I think you did I great ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Capturing the Details
Hey! I have to say that I thought this poem was super creative and really painted a nice picture in my head. So to start of with, I really like ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: The Girl You Loved.
Hey! I really liked this poem and think you did a great job with trying to get your point across. So to start off with, I have to say that ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: Mother Like You
Hey! I really liked this piece, it made me feel happy and appreciative of my own mother. To start off, I have to say that I really liked the creative ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Psychosis
Hey Littlebunny! I see your relatively new to this site so I just want to welcome you to YWS and I hope you have a great time here! If you ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Bipolar
Hey! I'm here to do a review on this very unique song. And I love to write songs too, so I know at least somewhat of what I'm talking about ...
Dec 29, 2013
