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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Body of Time

    Hey! First of all, I have to say; wow. This is such an amazing poem, I loved it, the language you used to paint your images was beautiful. I loved ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Deep Pool

    Hey! I have to say that I really enjoyed this poem, it is very flowing and well written. I loved the way it flowed and how every line stayed consistent ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: The Time I Fought Death

    Hey, I have to say that I think this a very simple, yet cool and unique poem you have written here. I enjoyed the underlying message of human nature and ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: ???Checking out me history

    Hey! I have to say that what I have read so far has intrigued me. To start off with, and this may be a bit obvious, but you should definitely ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: everyone, everyone, no one, no one.

    Hey, I have to say that this is a very original poem, and I enjoyed reading it very much. To start off with, I would get rid of the unnecessary ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Me

    Hey! So I have to say that this is a very simple poem, but I enjoyed the larger theme behind it. To start off with, I really enjoyed the theme ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Where have I been?

    Hey! I have to say, this is a very interesting poem, and it drew me in straight from the start. To start off with, as I mentioned before, I think ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Peaceful Destruction

    Wow, I have to say that I really enjoyed this poem and I think your use of metaphors is amazing. Great job! So to start off with, I really enjoyed ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: loveholic

    Hey! I have to say I really liked this piece, it was a topic that is a bit of a cliche in the world of poetry, but it was done ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: The Noose

    Hey, so to start off, I have to say I really loved the way everything flowed so smoothly and the rhyming didn't sound choppy. I think you did I great ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Capturing the Details

    Hey! I have to say that I thought this poem was super creative and really painted a nice picture in my head. So to start of with, I really like ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl You Loved.

    Hey! I really liked this poem and think you did a great job with trying to get your point across. So to start off with, I have to say that ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mother Like You

    Hey! I really liked this piece, it made me feel happy and appreciative of my own mother. To start off, I have to say that I really liked the creative ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: Psychosis

    Hey Littlebunny! I see your relatively new to this site so I just want to welcome you to YWS and I hope you have a great time here! If you ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Bipolar

    Hey! I'm here to do a review on this very unique song. And I love to write songs too, so I know at least somewhat of what I'm talking about ...

    Dec 29, 2013


One is not born, but rather becomes a woman.
— Simone de Beauvoir, The Second Sex