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Re: .
Hello Dark I liked you story so much last time that I had to read some more of your work. I hope this helps you out some. Okay the first ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Episode 1: Ryan Zekrom Sparker.
Hello dark review for you not much help sorry. Hope it helps a tiny bit. It feels good. Well this is good but it might sound better like this "It ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Hello hope this helps. Well I am not sure wither you thought this was good enough for us to see because if it is the case then you were wrong. ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Boxed In.
Hello. Jordin here with a review for you and my team so called the hot sauce team. Hope this helps you out. Your mouth is open, Your heart is screaming. ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat: Friends in Need
Hello Swag. Jordin here with a review for you and my team so called team hot sauce. I sure hope this helps you out buddy. Okay in this chapter you ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat: Return of Conckle Part I
Hello jordin here with a review for you and the red team so called Hot Sauce. I hope this helps you out buddy. What a fun mornign to partake of! ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat: Never Back Down
Hello jordin here with a review for you and my team red. Hope this helps. So he went to the vet but the vet wanst there 'Wanst'? I think you ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat III
Hello jordin here with a review for you and my team red. Hope this helps you out. Okay in this book you need to capitalize all of the first letters ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat II
Hello jordin here with a reveiw that is for you and my team. Hope this helps. but (he didnt want to really). Okay you should take out the parenthesis and ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Heads or Tails Chapter Two - 1st Revision
Hello, jordin here with a review for you for the red team. I sure hope this review helps you out. littering my house paddock indicating the volume of people Okay ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Ink ~ Chapter Two
Hello, jordin here with a review for the red team it is also for you though. Hope this helps you out. The music woke me up. Okay you could re ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: The Phantom Menace
Hello. jordin here with a review for the red team which should have been called Ketchup. I sure hope this little review helpes. but rather a standup guy. Maybe. Okay ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: The Fox
Hello Fortis (Fellow Hot sauceean.) jordin here for a review. I sure hope this little thing helps you and our team. This story is good the way you wrote about ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Phosphenes for escape
Hello Lava, Jordin here with a small review for you by the way I love your avatar. I sure hope this help you out. Flickering lights of colour squeezing shut ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Certitudes
Hello Red, jordin here for a review for you that I am sorry may be small. Hope this helps buddy. There are certain obligations that he is disinclined to fulfill. ...
May 26, 2013