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Jonathan

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Family First

    Hello there here is me with a review to save you from all odds chacharge. :D OK you did really good here I like it a lot but still it ...

    Apr 22, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Scatty Cat: A Letter from S.D. General

    Hello there here is a me with a review hope it helps although it wont be to big hope it helps once again. XD OK you spelling was great and ...

    Apr 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Seeker

    Hello there here is a me with a review for ya I hopes it helps yu out. :D OK you did really good but I think you need to put ...

    Apr 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flying Time

    Hello there here I am to save you XD with a review. Well I really hope that this short little review will help you out some. OK you are definitely ...

    Apr 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonderland

    Hello there here is a review for ya that I do hope helps you. :D OK this is really weird funny the first thing I noticed is that there is ...

    Apr 17, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fantasy Awakening Chapter 1

    Hello there Pegasusgirl2 here i is with a review sorry I don't really have the time for a large review so I let em make this a little quick. OK ...

    Apr 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: I Wish This Was A Goodbye

    Hello there, here I am for a review or with a review for you I really hope it helps. OK you did really good here you introduced the person just ...

    Apr 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sometimes in Life

    Hello there here is a me with a review I hope that this helps you. :D OK here you are a bit discordant see There are times I want to ...

    Apr 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Beast of Mount Hakarak

    Hello there here is a Jordiny with a review for you I really hope that it helps and welcome too YWS this place can be really fun once you get ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: NaPoWriMo #2

    Hello there here is a Jordin with a review hahaha I will defeat this beautiful but viscus poem I hope that it helps. :D Well it is kind of hard ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Curosity.

    Hello there here is a jordin or a Jonathan with a review I really hope it helps you out. :D Well you can be right in some cases but in ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Death Wish

    Hello here is a very unlucky little squirrel with nothing but a shield a soot of armor a very short sword and not much else to defeat this mighty poem. ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Picket Fences and Blue Doors

    Hello there here is a poor little squirrel all stuck up in a soot of armor and dose not even have enough of a sword to do much against this ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wanting

    Hello there here I am for a review I hope it helps. OK the amount of felling is OK but you should try to put a little bit more. Good ...

    Apr 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: That time

    Hello here is a little knight squirrel with not very much of a sword with a review that I hope will help you. :D OK this here is not very ...

    Apr 6, 2013


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