Hello,
This is Doctor Louis Dannon-Gerald from the Scoobery-Doobery Town general hospital. I know you were expecting a story from Scatty Cat this time, but I'm afraid I have some bad news. Scatty Cat has overdosed of hookers and LSD, and he is in critical condition. We are giving all of our best attempts to revive him. I must assure you though, none of his hallucinations have been real. In fact, many of the stories he wrote may have not even been real. There is no Dr. Lu-Danger. He does not exist. His friend Northwash is also simply a drug addict who gets his highs off of pills and old magazines. I am very sory to inform you of this too, but there is no Dr. Lu-Danger. And please don't come to see Scattycat, he's too weak to talk or even reveal where he is. Also please do not call the hospital we are terribly busy at the moment so just please forget this ever happened.
Regards,
Louis D.G.
M.D. D.M.D
S.D. General
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Hi there, Swag
It needs more purpose. And if you put some in there, make it exciting! The more hooked the reader is, the better the writing. Other people have commented on your spelling so I shall not repeat them. Good luck with this!
Well, I have read all of Scatty Cat. This was humorous though, and entertaining. But apart from that, I found it reasonably pointless. Is this a way of ending all the other Scatty Cat pieces. It may be entertaining, but to me it's too short and full lof long names.
Deanie x
Haha! This humor made my day! Well you have some grammar mistakes and some punctuation errors but this. What ever it's supposed to be, is really uh, entertaining. I have not seen the whole Scatty Cat franchise so forgive me.
Hello there here is a me with a review hope it helps although it wont be to big hope it helps once again. XD
OK you spelling was great and all that kind of stuff to it was good but what is the point of it its way to bland just a little tiny bitty thing about a doctors note or something. :{
One thing you need to make it a lot bigger.
Keep writing and good luck.
Good work you did good with all the stuff that really counts.
Until later "god be with you and good luck."
~ Jon ~
I hope it helped you out some.
Forgive me if I rambled.