JohnLocke1

Hello, my friend. First, let me say that this is my first review in quite a long time, so I apologize for any slip ups, inconsistencies, or what have you. ...

Hello, my friend. First, an intriguing concept. I think with a bit of work, this could be transformed into an interesting short story. Second, some grammatical things: Overall, I would ...

Hello, my friend. First, you have absolutely beautiful writing. The words were sonorous as I heard them in my head, flowing with such refined brilliance that I was honestly surprised. ...

Hello, my friend. First, a wonderfully gripping story. Your writing was incredibly rhythmic; it all flowed seamlessly together. You have an impressive talent for tight, intricate, and moving writing.

Hello, my friend. First, I am glad to be reading your writing again. I had just read the prologue a few minutes ago, and I am eager to tell you ...

Hello, my friend. First, a combination of Greek mythology and Harry Potter? It is only my dream come true! And I apologize for reviewing this work. I saw your other ...

Hello, my friend. First, I must tell you that this is my first review in quite a while. I apologize in advance; I may be a little rusty. Having said ...

Hello, my friend. First, I'm so happy that I get to read your work again! I did so enjoy reading the previous chapters. As you might have guessed, I have ...

Hello, my friend. First, Welcome to the Young Writers Society! Trust me, you will enjoy your time here. But, back to your short story. This rather reminded me of a ...

Hello, my friend. First, your writing is as beautiful and effortless as in the previous chapter. You know what you are trying to say and the images that you are ...

Hello, my friend. First, I saw the later chapters of this novel in the Green Room. It is an absolute horror, of course, for works to reside in the Green ...

Hello, my friend. First, I saw that this piece had been lying in the Green Room for far too long. It is simply a travesty. On to your story itself. ...

Hello, my friend. First, I thought that this chapter was a definite improvement upon the last. I could see solid characterization beginning to form, but there is always room for ...

Hello, my friend. First, I agree with the reviewer below: there are a great many of these poems being written currently. However, we disagree on one point: I think that ...

Hello, my friend. First, I saw that the second chapter of this novel has a disappointing amount of reviews. Therefore, I am reviewing this chapter so that I may go ...