Young Writers Society

Ironically I have only begun reading Alice in Wonderland this very day, And you have sold me on reading some more tomorrow. This poem strikes me as a kind of ...

I recall Shakespeare in a sense. A simple yet profound message. Some dreams won't come true however that dose not mean we dream in vain. Interesante abstract. "What dose it ...

To have and Hold. This Poem is clearly about feelings of intimacy (or at least feelings of desiring intimacy). Overall I think you did a nice job capturing this emotion. ...

This is an important message however to be honest I feel like the medium of letters kinda makes it awkward in some areas. Like the kids letters feel a bit ...

So greek mythology. Yet you are spelling god with a capital G for some reason. But honestly this is a pretty good poem. It very much feels like a new ...

Okay I will preface this by saying that I am not personally a fan of rhyme poetry, It always feels constricting to me. But this is a good poem. "Big ...

So True. Now I am noticing this trend on the YWS that people will publish photos of their poems rather than retype them at the publishing center. And I am ...

A Fascinating picture of the end. I find references to the threat of Climate change coupled with an almost Biblical tone regarding the end. This poem feels like someone saying ...

I like how the text is all in one big blurb because that visually drives the point of Time management being extinct. Almost like this was rushed itself. But I ...

A contemporary reminder of old writer. I will admit that I am not familiar with Proust's work myself but I can pick up on what a love letter this poem ...

It's good. The Rhyming kinda distracted me at first but I eventually got used to it. It feels like you are using familiar things to describe an abstract emotion. There ...

I am reminded of Hans Christian Andersens "The Snow Queen" which featured a magic mirror that would only reflect the worst aspects of a person. I personally have not read ...

Implied suicide. You gave us a fair warning at the beginning. This poem possess al lot of Pathos and vulnerability but also a sense of uniformity. You repeat the phrase ...

wow this is something Thought-Provoking. The description makes me recall Norse Mythology. "As the Universe shakes the dew from IT IS fur." yeah this feels like a Ragnorok. This is ...

Mental illness is not portrayed in the media too often. You preface this story by informing people that you yourself suffer from OCD and Schizophrenia. It is good that you ...